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Our Girl and Captain James Discussion Thread Vol IV

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icemist · 14/11/2014 19:05

Feel free to join in as we discuss all things Our Girl related

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Richtea19 · 24/11/2014 21:27

Sorry Rhubarb I can't type tonight!

Rhubarb01 · 24/11/2014 21:32

At my peril and knowing everyone's little foibles (beginning to feel sorry for Klipdoctor now), I will attempt to write a complete scene for anyone who wants a full version which I will post up later in one go, it might take a little while so it could end up on the next thread.

However, in the meantime, anyone who would like to do alternative paragraphs as per chain story idea, please do - it would be fun!

orphan · 24/11/2014 21:33

Oh rhubarb you've got me hooked!

snumpy · 24/11/2014 21:38

Oh wow Rhubarb, I would definitely like to read more of your story.

Nickel45 · 24/11/2014 21:45

Very clever, rhubarb, indeed ... that's brilliant, keep going ... Can't wait read more! Smile

apsara03 · 24/11/2014 21:49

go for it rhubarb, lip biting - can't wait for the next installmentWink

Ilovelblue · 24/11/2014 21:57

It's years since I did any creative writing. Correcting somebody else's reports at work isn't quite the same thing. Is this any good?

Where? We can’t talk here, can we?”
“We’ll have to go to my quarters. Follow me round.”

It was all he could do not to hold her and to comfort her but it was too risky and he was stern faced, desperately reining in all his emotions, as they went back to his quarters. Molly sniffed and tried to wipe away her tears so that none of Two Section could tell what had just passed between their captain and medic.

Captain James opened the door and pushed Molly in ahead of him. She looked round, taking it all in, the neat and orderly paperwork on the desk, his clothes all on hangers, and everywhere there was that musky, manly smell she had come to love. The time before when she had been in, the night when he had given her the words to the duet they were about to sing, it was dark and she had in fact been caught unawares when he shouted of her. It was also the night he first called her “Dawsie” and when she had started to wonder if her attraction towards him was in fact being reciprocated.

“What are we going to do Boss? I don’t think I can go on much longer like this. I’ve already admitted to you how I feel and I am scared I can’t hide it much longer from the rest of the Section.”

Captain James sighed and dragged his hands through his hair and rubbed the back of his neck. “It’s against all army regulations Molly, you know that, but I'm finding it hard to control my feelings towards you. I can’t even look at you without wondering who’s noticed me. Kinders is a bit more perceptive than you would think! And I was sure Dangleberries knew something was up when we were singing the duet and he was playing the keyboard.”

Molly just stared at him, almost unable to comprehend that he was saying he was just as attracted to her as she was to him.

“I think if we can hang on till we finish this tour, I will speak to my CO, tell him how I feel and then when we get home, one of us will have to be assigned elsewhere. If we can wait out, I think we can sort this easily and still be together.” He bit his lip again uncertainly, waiting for Molly’s agreement, hoping and praying that he’d said the right thing. She was an unpredictable little madam and he couldn’t be sure he’d handled this right.

Not speaking before she moved, Molly reached up and kissed him full on the lips.

To be continued............

Ilovelblue · 24/11/2014 22:01

Not sure I can see where this is going unless they have the most heavenly rampant sex and I'm not sure I'd feel comfortable writing that down! Are we following the lines of the story (where they have to wait until Bath) or are we doing something different?

Nickel45 · 24/11/2014 22:04

Wow, ilove, fantastic.

Not sure if you meant it how I read it but Spot on about dangles, did you see his face during the song Wink.

icemist · 24/11/2014 22:04

fab iloveblue

have c+p it. so I have it as a full story as everyone those who can contribute

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orphan · 24/11/2014 22:07

Am loving this, ilovelblue.

Ilovelblue · 24/11/2014 22:07

Yes, Nickel, that's how I intended it re Dangleberries. I'm happy to carry on writing with Rhubarb but you might have to give me a few clues about the direction we need to take. Don't think I can do much smut though. If that's what you want, somebody else might have to take over. Crikey, everyone who knows me would have a fit if they knew I was doing this!

Richtea19 · 24/11/2014 22:08

Ilove wow, brilliant. Both of you are so very talented .

Great idea Icemist re. Copy and paste. I've done that too!!!

Ilovelblue · 24/11/2014 22:10

I reckon we ought to start the new thread now - there's only 11 more messages to go. Who can do that? And also put the link to the new thread on here.

icemist · 24/11/2014 22:11

we're near the 999/1000 posts again.

I don't mind starting it again. Will do link in very last post. unless anyone else wants to start it?

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Rhubarb01 · 24/11/2014 22:12

Iloveblue love it. I don't do smut either! Will have to be meaningful and romantic. Anyway, they 'haven't actually done anything' if we want to stay true to the story - so we can stay true to our principles! Happy to try the next scene if that's alright!

icemist · 24/11/2014 22:14

new thread started, will post link last post if thats ok?
Message for BA again?

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Ilovelblue · 24/11/2014 22:14

Fire away! This will be a real challenge. Is it just us do you think? There are a couple of women authors (whose names escape me) who write as a double act! Maybe we could be "IloveRhubarb"!

Richtea19 · 24/11/2014 22:16

Yes pls Icemist, head of IT!

icemist · 24/11/2014 22:17

iloverhubarb love it

enjoying your work so far

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Nickel45 · 24/11/2014 22:18

Meaningful and romantic is brill .... Infant anything is brilliant (I wouldn't even know where to start).

(Cant wait to see if you can get a mention of low slung trousers or stags, etc into the story .... Sorry, I couldn't resist!)

Nickel45 · 24/11/2014 22:20

In fact not infant (hope I've not just blown the number of posts)

Ilovelblue · 24/11/2014 22:21

Not sure about stags, but I am wearing my stag knickers today - maybe they have given me inspiration! Loll

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