Critique my particulars...

[EdlessAllenPoe]

what do you make of these?

www.michaeljones.co.uk/property-howard-road-west-sussex-lan120122-full.html

picture of our back garden looks a bit poor to me....

but the lounge looks nice. wish i'd remembered to tidy the radio out of the kitchen...seems rather brief too, though i think they say they don't want the whole house shown as they want people through the door.

I can't get either link at the beginning to work, I just get their main page, has it been taken down?

They have been taken down, and we have just approved the second draft which includes much of what has been mentioned - has pictures of 'downland views' mentions all the things here....

doesn't show our dining area. i am debating a slightly larger table to 'stage' the room.

Pictures are much better.

Good luck with the sale.

Much better.

I would still bring down the height of those front shrubs, lovely bright pictures of the front, and fields.

It is a shame that the lights were not put on in the bedroom, it looks very dark.

Wow, those are so much better- hope you have offers flooding in soon.

Can we see?

QOD- if you go back to OP's original link, the new pics are there.

Nope, just takes me to the website in general, what am I doing wrong?

this is it I think

Nope, just to the web site again

ok let's try rightmove

Amazing difference! Doesn't look like the same back garden and front photo looks like a home rather than a what is lurking behind bushes wonder.

Good luck

revised particulars

It is a shame that the lights were not put on in the bedroom, it looks very dark.

many tweaks that i would have done were not done because i was at work whilst these photos were taken (DH was there)- (i was also going to unplug the telly and push it back against the wall as the wiring looks messy)

still i think these will get people through the door! We had a viewing on thursday, they liked this one instead... shabby chic palace

though they were positive about our house.

this one is probably the most similar onein the location, though this has been on 3 months now...

i have a plan to send in DH to generally tame the garden a bit better, needs doing anyway.

he will at least trim my front bushes :) they've got slightly too big for the intended purpose...(however much i like privacy, they are just encroaching on the view from my head height)

I wonder if the wig type thing hanging from the shower, in the second house could by why 3 months!

i think that one is tenanted, and not having a bath will put people off.. also back garden not private at all.

Much much better! I'd buy it