Truthfully they haven't made much effort with these! The front photo is terrible and I would make them change that asap as so many people won't even bother to read the particulars if the picture of the front of the house doesn't appeal to them. It needs to be taken from the drive.
The only mention of views in the bullet points is "sea glimpses" which is a bit wishy washy.
They haven't mentioned what is on the floor in any of the rooms (carpet/tiles etc).
The bedrooms are stated as having radiators, plural. Is this right? I can see it possibly in the large bedroom but bedroom 2 doesn't seem big enough to warrant more than one.
Being picky here but "complimenting ceramics" in the bathroom should be "complementing ceramics"
Kitchen - "a range of roll edge working surfaces"?? Do they mean that you have more than one type of worksurface i.e laminate and stainless steel/ wood and granite? I can only see the black worksurface but they don't state what it is made of. "A range of ash fronted base and drawers below" - I guess they mean a range of ash fronted base units with drawers.
Breakfast area - sliding upvc patio door (singular)? There should be a photo taken from the kitchen area and including the view out through the patio doors to the garden.
The back garden pictures need to be taken again, immediately at the rear of the house so that it includes the patio if this is possible?
A few less commas and a few more full stops!
I would definately include a picture of the master bedroom as it's quite large and has the doors out to the garden.
Maybe I'm just fussy......