quick gramar question

[marialuisa]

Can any of you resolve a debate please?

Should it be:

a) How self-esteem influences personal attractiveness and judgements on others' attractiveness

b) How self-esteem----on others attractiveness

C) something completely different

The version the student has used is defo wrong but we can't agree what would be correct.

Thanks!

sorry another pedant here

Grammar not gramar!

didn't want to mention that one....lol

How does self-esteem influence personal attractiveness and how does it affect perceptions of attraciveness?

still utterly shit

Thanks for the help.
"Gramar" was a typo and "judgements" was the student's choice of spelling.

The student in question was awarded 53% for her project overall with a D- for the title. DH thinks the D- was probably too generous.