Ok thoughts
The kerb appeal is dreadful
The before street view is so much more attractive, if you were going to remove all the planting you should have at least done block paving not tarmac and clear the weeds etc
I have found the photos of the 2023 purchase and whilst you have renovated small things like dark grout in a bathroom to me just scream people using the marker pens to colour in stained grouting.
The kitchen well it looks like you've just stained the old kitchen and the flooring wood colour jars with the wood in the kitchen, personally it would be something I'd be pricing up to change
The pitch of upstairs room will put someone people off I personally would have staged these as a kids bedroom and an office/guest room as a family will be more likely to place children upstairs with adults downstairs.
You haven't staged the house at all remember a lot of buyers are used to seeing show homes not empty homes and alot of people can not visualize layouts and zones.
When we renovated ours we decided to basically put a shiny new build home with the nice skirting, kitchen larder, utility room etc
And also yes one of the main draws of a non new build home is an established garden well for me anyway so external space is key, especially with children. Unless you market it to landlords for a house share...