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Need some help on wording part of my application

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mosschops30 · 09/01/2009 16:14

I am trying to say that I have a keen interest in this area of nursing and I feel that a position here would further my career, but that doesnt sound good and I just wondered if anyone had a better way of putting it, TIA

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mosschops30 · 09/01/2009 16:38

bump

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CeceliaAhern · 09/01/2009 16:45

This position would allow me to contribute to an area of nursing which has always interested me. I believe my present skills make me emminintly suitable , and I would be keen to develop them further still in this post.

GiraffeAHolic · 09/01/2009 16:52

I strongly believe that my keen interest in the particular area makes me an extremely viable candidate for this position. The skills learned would undoubtably allow to significantly progress in my career.

DorisIsAPinkDragon · 09/01/2009 16:57

something about being excited by the opportunity to expand my knowledge base and further develop clinical skills within this speciality

mosschops30 · 09/01/2009 16:58

All great thanks, just trying to find a way of wording it all into current app

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DorisIsAPinkDragon · 09/01/2009 16:58

personaly I wouldn't put anything in about progressing in your career for the future as if it's NHS particularly they will want you to stay with them...

mosschops30 · 09/01/2009 17:01

yes thats true, thats why I didnt want to put that this position would further my career.
I dont think my ideal job even exists yet but Im holding out for it and womens health is a step closer

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