Bit too stompy. The Paso is the man’s dance in the same way the Rumba is the ladies, he’s really got to command the floor. When you walk it should be driving across the floor.
It also annoys me when they talk about curving the spine without talking about the rotation that is also needed through it. My dance teacher always told me that the body position has 3 key curves - the C-shape, a twisting rotation through the spine and a sideways curve - think about the matador holding his cape out to the side.