How does this sound? Have I missed anything? Could it be worded better?
Part 2 of the statement should be amended as it does not give a true narrative of history or ds’s needs. Each and every special educational need should be set out and should include all diagnoses.
Part 3 of the statement should be amended. Law requires the provision to be specified and quantified. For each need identified, there should be matching help in Part 3. R v Secretary of State for Education ex parte E [1992] 1 FLR 377.If Part 2 is seen as the diagnosis of SENs, then Part 3 is the prescription for them.
Part 3 should set out the objectives that the provision is intended to meet and if something is identified as an objective, the statement should set out the provision intended to meet it: C v East Sussex CC [2004] EWHC 3122 (Admin), [2005] ELR 367
As parts 2 have not identified needs and part 3 is not specified and quantified, objectives of the statement are inappropriate and my child’s progress towards the objectives is immeasurable.
I will then be attaching a copy of the statement I have rewritten.