I've REALLY buggered about with lots of your quotes
You know, for coherency mainly: you say "It" when REALLY the paragraph needs it to say "TK Maxx" or it makes no SENSE or "Her" and it REALLY must say "Your mother"
So basically I'm making it up and I'm apologising now
Hope that's okay
I'm in a rush now because there is a massive storm and the lights and flickering