Ds's writing - he's 5.1 and finishing reception

[Sleepswithbutterflies]

Is this about average?
It says 'The cat is doing something wrong. he is biting! Stop it!

He did it on his own and after went back and corrected the lower case h to an upper case.

I'd say its about average, it's about the same as DD's (she's 5 and 3/4) but your DS's spacing is better.

The writing is about average in appearance. I think the use of the exclamation mark is pretty fantastic though.

Oh good.
His writing has suddenly taken off after finding he had +8 vision. He's had his glasses a fortnight and it's already made a huge difference but I'm aware it's really hindered his progress this year in reading and writing.