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A request to level this piece of writing

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Campaspe · 12/05/2014 17:33

I would be grateful if you could tell me what level you think this writing by my DD would be. It's a story inspired by Harry Potter (which she has never read or seen, but wants to very much!) The writing is neat and joined. Spelling and punctuation are reproduced exactly:

chapter one two normal people

Mrs. Potter was a normal person and so was Mr Potter. Not an adventurus kind at all, but their little son Harry Potter was a wized. Not a nasty wized at all, but a kind and helpful one. All year round Harry had been dreaming of going to a school called Hogwarts academy, he had been dreaming of going there since Harry first herd of it! Harry's mum had sigend up for him to go there and now it was just one more week till he started his lesson's at Hogwarts. His little owl Snowy hooted to say I can't wait until the next week so we can go to Hogwarts together. Harry was still a bit scared even though he was 17. He said to his owl "your look after me won't you". Snowy hooted as to say yes.

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One week later Mrs Potter gave Harry a big bear hug and Mr Potter gave Snowy a magic berry and said to snowy don't eat it. "Whats that asked Harry curiously, it's a little thing to keep you safe. Suddenly there was a bang and a big flash of light. Harry let the whirl wind take him up into the sky! hes gone are son has gone.
Gone to Hogwarts I expect chuckled Mr Potter. Don't laugh snapped Mrs Potter, he is our son you know. I suppose so said Mr Potter in a ashemed vocie. Don't worry about it come on lets have some lemonade and read our books. I wonder what Harry will do at Hogwarts? asked Mrs Potter, she was the chatty one out of them. I don't know agreed Mr Potter.

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Campaspe · 12/05/2014 22:36

Bump.

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Fairenuff · 12/05/2014 22:49

2a, 3c?

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