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Could someone level this writing please?

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Bloodywornoutnow · 22/02/2014 11:29

Written as dd has written it

The enchanted wood!

Chapter 1
The enchanted wood
Once upon a time there lived 3 fairies their names were rosey, elizabeth and olivia, they were all sisters.They lived in a toadstool in the enchanted wood.One day the three faries set of to pick strawberrys from the strawberrybush.but when they sailed through the lake they saw big bad billy...... hes the most biggest fish in the lake.Them faries got eaten and they were never seen again.The three faries mummy and daddy were looking for them everywear bt they could not find the three faries anywhere.

Chapter 2
The big adventure
The hole town split up looking for them 3 faries, even the elves looked for the faries and the gnome and the witches.But suddenly they thought the faries might be in the lake.So the elves went on a boat looking for the faries...

Chapter 3
Big bad trouble
The elves didnt look where they were going and they got swolen by big bad billy too...
Suddenly a pirate appeared and came to the rescue by getting the elves and faries out of big bad barry.They all liked happily ever after
THe eND!

Thanks

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Are your children’s vaccines up to date?
mrz · 24/02/2014 20:23

Based on that single piece I wouldn't give higher than 2C but that doesn't mean that is her level.

columngollum · 24/02/2014 20:38

I think most people are aware of the fact that not all pieces of anybody's writing are all equally as good (or as bad) as each other. I think if people wanted an average for writing ability they'd post several pieces of work all at the same time. I think the reason they post one and ask about it is..

because they want to know about it.

mrz · 24/02/2014 20:40

I don't think most people are aware of how schools level writing or they wouldn't need to ask.

Fairenuff · 24/02/2014 23:09

I would say 2c because of the inconsistency with punctuation. There are only 3 openers in the whole piece of writing and very few connectives.

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