Levelling work

[littlemiss06]

Please could someone level this piece of work, I know on its own it won't give a full picture but just curious.

I Whent to my freds house and I then pplayd with the toys sudlly a big era Blon landed my fered cound sed do you whont to go on it hi sed I sed will it werck yes of cors. Whay did you sad that bicos if it das not then we will de in a lott of tbro'll sed will do you whont to go on it no! Whay Look at it boutfell collas sed will well I spos I could have a litt go. and awhey that when isnt this fun yes. tolld yos so I now.

I would say level 1b, I can hardly understand it to be honest!

Thank you that's probably about what I was expecting :)

I have no idea, but my curiosity has the better of me.
I think I understand most of it, but the line that says
"why did you say that, because if it does not then we will die in a lot of tbro'll"
what is tbro'll? Or have I completely misinterpreted?

Sorry it's supposed to be tbroll which is trouble

brilliant!

It is very tricky to read. How old is the child?

I'd say 1b. How old is the child? Reception?

Year 3 just wanted to see if she's getting any better

I would expect better spelling and punctuation in Y3, but punctuating conversation can be confusing - many adults struggle with it. Apart from that, it is quite a complex and detailed story. I had no "tbor'll" understanding it.

:) brilliant, I was really pleased, I know it's not we're she should be but it was great for her, I felt so proud, her spelling has come on loads