These are 2 pieces of writing my son has done at school , what level would you give them? I'm not sure if school are inflating his grades so hence the reason for asking your opinions.
Tuesday 13th March at 9:00 my class and class 2 set of on a conch to Eden camp. We went there because in Topic we were doing world war 2 so that is why we went to eden camp.
When we got there is look amasing. Firstly we when to hut 1. Hitler was planning to invaned poland and other cochty
Senodly we when into hut 3 and we saw a sibne sick and this man trying to swim up.
Thirdly we when into hut 12 which is where we had luch. I was relly huney Next we when to hut 16 which is were the puppets show and then Mrs waller said ? Rubbish then finlly we went to the Gift shop.
My opinyen is ?I had a wonderful day?
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On the 2nd March 1940 I hobbed into my Dad?s office behide the Book shelves was a serat door to a serat room. I was clues of what was happening to me so I ask my Dad He says ?There is a war 2 between Briten and Germany.? Mutted Dad I said ?what has it got to do with us? I mutted Dad said ?Because they are blawing it on us.
?some people are in there? mutted the man ?we will go and check it out2 whiped the soied. Sadly we got caaght some we went ti a cortime trash camp I died
Thanks