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Can a teacher please give me an idea what level writing this is please?

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greenwichgroove · 16/08/2012 00:51

Dds story.

Jake at the olympics.

Jake was a very large furry dog he loved running his onose (owners) were mr and mrs fosters and jakes friend sam. Sam took Jake for a walk twise a day but today mr and misses foster were going to watch the olympics, Jake went with them when they got there Jake dised (?) to snece the on the running trak mr and misses goster went to watch the race negan they didn't relise that Jake came first they were pleased on the newd when they got home Jake was on tv and it said the first dog to win a medel agaist bolt. they swited the telly off and went to bed.

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greenwichgroove · 16/08/2012 00:54

Sorry daft phone she has spelt news. and foster right my fat fingers on touch screen did it wrong!

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FallenCaryatid · 16/08/2012 00:55

High 1a, or a 2c.

flexybex · 16/08/2012 00:56

'dised to snece' is decided to sneak'!

greenwichgroove · 16/08/2012 00:57

Thankyou.

Ahh well decoded flexy!

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RedHelenB · 17/08/2012 12:41

1a I'd say.

Orchidskeepdying · 20/08/2012 09:29

1a / 2c

yellowdandelion · 23/08/2012 08:24

Yes I'd say more 1a due to lack of punctuation, although she has some good vocabulary.

pookamoo · 23/08/2012 08:27

Not a teacher, but a lovely story, well done OP's DD. I'm assuming she's little - how old is she?

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