anyone want to comment on a leaflet i have going out

[southeastastra]

it sounds pants to me but too late to change. please can someone tell me it's ok?!

i'll email it to you

you can mail it to me if you like.

[email protected]

thank you will email you

no probs

ive sent it the more i look at it the more i hate it! it's too late to change tho

have replied.

It all looked okay to me.

Fantastic thing it's advertising as well

its so hard and we're just launching it here

good luck with it.

If it were closer to me, I'd give it a go

it's a national thing, just taking time to get out to all councils

oooh, I'll check out my local council's website, maybe we do have it

i'm so worried as it's my project!! would you send your children?

you would never know by my typing or grammar, but i'm a copywriter - do you want me to have a look at it?

my eldest is 14 and I would be more than happy for her to go along.

My littlies are too young to go on their own so I'd go with them

But yes, I would go. I would have no problem with an 8 year old going on their own either.

email is kellie whitehead (NO SPACE0 at aol DOT com

good! i really hope it's a success, it's playing on my mind so much and we're only going out on holidays.

other boroughs are launching all year

Ooh please send it to me. [email protected]

let me know how it goes

I've checked and it doesn't look like my council is doing anything along those lines this summer, but I'll keep an eye out

i just want it to be a success

squonk my sister has the same name as you btw!