Anyone on here able to do a childrens story critique?

[pinkroses]

That's it really. I have a manuscript for a children's story that I need critiqued.

Can anyone help.

ps...need it ASAP!!!

Anyone????

There should be someone, please keep posting through out the day, you never know when the writers would be onlline. HTH

Thanks Chandra. I'll keep bumping.

I'll have a go Crit or proofread?

I can do that stuff. How long is your ms?

sorry ggggl! You first.

we can do a compare and contrast job, anorak!

No, no you do it. I'm a bit snowed under really but I thought I'd speak as I hadn't noticed you'd already offered. Go for your life

yeah- i am a teacher so read lots of stories every day- would be happy to have a look .