I need a favour re: objective view on my work.

[hermionestranger]

Help! I'm currently studying an access course in humanities and my grades have dropped from distinctions To merits.

I NEED distinctions for my uni course of choice and I can't see where and what I am doing differently. My tutor says thing alike, it's is an overall excellent piece of work, but not quite well enough and keep doing what you are doing! Very helpful!

So what I am asking is if anyone could look over my work and give me a proper idea of what it is that is causing my grades to have dropped!

I havent specialised in humanities( I am in IT), but I wouldnt mind giving your work a lookover :)

You could try asking the tutor for the marking criteria to see exactly where you are losing the marks. If you don't get anywhere try the course leader.

I'd give it a go, I have a degree in languages which included (some) literature, (some) history and (some) economics. PM if you are interested.