My babysitting website - constuctive criticism and advice welcome!

[schneebly]

I know you lot are good at this! Please feel free to make suggestions on how to improve it and point out any spelling, typing or grammatical errors! I am going out for a short while soon so will get back!

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Sheik - may arrange for piccies of self with children

Yes I think maybe I am cheap - I asked a while ago on here and got mixed answers on money people would pay so went for the lower end. A bit scared of pricing too high. You can get a 'sitters' babysitter all vetted and stuff for about £5.50 per hour (although I think there is a joining fee)

Sheik - have corrected a few pointed out to me already but would be very grateful if you could do that for me. Thank you very much indeed.

can you e-mail me?

[email protected]

I can C+P the text and send it to you as word doc or something

will do.

From a quick look it's great and I would snap you up if you were near me. I don't know the going rate for Southport but I think that you could charge more - I would rather use you than sitters because I would know that I would get you every time - sitters don't always send the same person which puts me off using them.

Done schneebly!

Good luck with it!

Good on you, Sheik! I can have a lazier evening now

I'd agree with LL about use of a logo on every page.

Font consistency - lose the comic sans on the front page it's distracting.

Font spacing - (might be too difficult if you're not a CSS person but setting p {line-height:1.5em;} might make things a bit more readable (haven't got time to have a proper look at it..

More pictures (as previously noted) but get them spread through the text to break it up a bit..

Any way to lose the ads? Doesn't make sense to advertise other babysitting services when you're trying to promote your own.

Just read that back and it's a little terse.. ..apologies I'm on a fly back posting... ;-)