Primary teachers (KS2) help please

[Yorkiegirl]

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hmm...give me ten minutes - or have you found something yet>?

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do you want the focus to be the writing itself or the character profile bit...as I know a few that give loads of character info but are fairly informal

but if you are going for more sentence structure malarky (nice 'happy coincedences' of good use of language, then the characterisation or first person bit is harder to find...

for example

double act by jacqueine wilson has a very informal character introduction in the first person........

whereas great expectation has a superb paragraph, written in Dickens style, but it is the third person......but i have used it with middle year six set and got some stunning written work based on it........ (but not first person)

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i am david has some good sections......

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we read the first chapter of great expectations....where pip is inthe grave yard and meets Magwich....the description begins:
"A feaful man, all in coarse grey, with a great iron on his leg..."

I have a writing frame for structuring your own writing (we described Mr Twit from The Twits using Dickens style)

I have a copy but it is at work.......

of both texts..

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not on disc - paper copy at work.....i am also on the sick

sure some mumsnetter woud scan you the first section though.....

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ohh the writing frame is on my laptop i think....which is in my bedroom!

Can sort that out for you.

If not, I can copy that out of a book - 10 mins to redo.....

and i have a copy of the text downstairs which i can scan if need be.....

remind me

i teach on the coast

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nice
but wit problems of a differnt kind i suppose

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I know the one you mean
is it a secondary one?
ST TM

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i will get that thing from my laptop at some point tomorrow for you
am mega busy from tomorrow til thursday but i will definitely get it for you

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