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Anyone fancy critiquing my first chapter

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Foreverinjeans · 17/10/2022 19:35

Eek.
I'm writing a book. It's not quite a crime, more real life drama. Chance encounter changing two lives.

Would anyone fancy critiquing the first chapter? I have re-written so many times.
The main body and ending are fine. If so I'll send on a PM. I can take criticism...

Thanks

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Foreverinjeans · 18/10/2022 09:51

Thanks. Have pm'd to those who requested. Be as brutal as you like. I'm struggling to get it right

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NCAutumn · 18/10/2022 09:52

Yes I will too

heldinadream · 18/10/2022 13:32

Foreverinjeans · 18/10/2022 09:51

Thanks. Have pm'd to those who requested. Be as brutal as you like. I'm struggling to get it right

Haven't had it OP?

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Foreverinjeans · 18/10/2022 13:50

heldinadream · 18/10/2022 13:32

Haven't had it OP?

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I have pinged it now Held. Thank you :)

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Byfleet · 18/10/2022 21:40

Hi OP. I requested a copy as I would be very happy that read and respond, but haven’t received pm.

Noelfieldingsjumpers · 18/10/2022 22:39

I'd love to have a read please

tootsierubs · 18/10/2022 22:52

Happy to help if you need anyone else

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