Would anyone like to read my short story?

[Thehouseofmarvels]

I have written a story of just over 4k words for a creative writing monologue competition. It's about a girl who grows up with gay dads ( she had an egg donor and a surrogate ) and about her life and relationships. I'm wondering if anyone would like to read it and tell me what I can do to make it better. I'd love to read your work too.

Sounds cool, OP! I'll give it a read if I get a chance :)

So I posted my story on a website called Deviant Art. My page name is also House of Marvels or you can drop me a message for a link.