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Will anyone read a short story draft of mine?

18 replies

Potpourripolly · 14/10/2020 15:00

Its not very long and I’d just love some general thoughts. It’s about a woman who feels that her life is falling apart and takes to drinking a lot of water to try and feel better about things.

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pooopypants · 14/10/2020 15:02

🙋‍♀️

Mo81 · 15/10/2020 09:57

Ill read it

NorksAreMessy · 15/10/2020 10:19

In real life my DD is an editor and does this for a living. ( and I am very proud of her, she’s GOOD)

BlueRose18 · 15/10/2020 10:30

I’d be interested in reading 😊

TheoneandObi · 15/10/2020 12:35

If you want another, I'll read it. But if you've enough armchair editors don't worry! Let us know if it sees the light of day though, and good luck!

Devlesko · 15/10/2020 12:36

I will, could do with the experience tbh.

Hearnoevilspeaknoevil · 15/10/2020 12:42

I'll read it.

Trinidading3 · 17/10/2020 10:52

Hi There
I would love to read it , I am writing something myself. My Grand Uncle was a writer one of his most well read books is " A House for Mr Biswas'
I could give you some feedback on your story

FurTeacup · 17/10/2020 23:15

Vidia Naipaul was your grand uncle, @Trinidading3?

Potpourripolly · 19/10/2020 20:34

Right I’ve finished my first draft now if anybody would be kind enough to read :)

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Oneearringlost · 19/10/2020 20:46

Where is it?
I'm interested to read it too

OldKingCole · 19/10/2020 20:57

I’d love to read it!

Bmidreams · 19/10/2020 20:57

I will!!

Potpourripolly · 22/10/2020 16:45

Hey some people have replied to say they’d read and I’ve PM’d to ask for email addresses but no response :( still on the lookout for readers! X

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youkiddingme · 24/10/2020 10:49

I would love to read it. Will pm you with an email address.

asIlayfrying · 27/10/2020 18:57

I will read it!

Bjollocks · 27/10/2020 19:13

I've read it and it's really good! Great writing and character! Very impressed. It's better than most of the stuff out there.

SequinsandStiIettos · 27/10/2020 19:18

PMing you now x

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