Hello! I don't normally post on here but I would really appreciate some honest thoughts on the story I have just written - I'm expected to read it out loud next week at a creative writing class, and would rather know now if it's terrible so I have time to amend it and not totally embarrass myself. I'd rather not post it as part of a permanent thread as may affect its chances of being published anywhere, but if you'd like to read could you message me?
It's about an emotionally charged woman who is sick of seeing everybody around her in love and getting engaged when she is still single (not entirely based on me... lol)