just updated my website,care to take a peek and leave feedback!

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please!
twinkletoes

please have a look and sign guestbook!
ta muchly

arr thanks bamboo,will change that now.

considering youve done it all by yourself i think its great. i certainly couldnt have done it, i got someone to do mine for me (mind you they did do it really well)

child protection is now safeguarding children.

Can I steal the op's idea and ask you all to look at mine if you have some spare time please? www.hayleyevans.co.uk I'm not sure about it - is it too talky!? Leave feedback on this thread pls,

Thanks xx

seriously From the spelling guru!

seriously From the spelling guru!

bamboo!!

Haven't read all responses on here so might say something someone else has mentioned!

I love the site, it's really cute and warm feeling gives a good homely vibe I think.

The only things I'm not so keen on are:

**Counter at bottom of home screen
**Number of menus at top, could they not be condensed - this is personal preference though really
**the text is a bit disjointed and could flow better; rather than short factual sentences could you turn it into a "story" with beginning, middle & end. I am Nik, my children are k & S. Used to work in ... now work as CM and have ... qualifications
**some minor formatting errors,like underline wrong colour etc

Have you thought about getting your own domain and ditching the freewebs stuff in the url?

It's quite easy to do (I can help if you like); so your domain could be www.twinkletoescare.co.uk should be fairly cheap to do too.

It's lovely though and you do comes accross really well x

thanks navy

I think your site looks really nice, well done!

However

I think your font is too big and make it look a bit amateurish.

I don't like the butterflies. At all. (sorry!)

And I think a photo of you is essential.

Like it; I'd send a child to you.

I know what people mean about the butterflies, but I quite like them.

On longer pages I wanted a 'back to top' button or the navigation repeated at the bottom.

The last line on your menu page is in a smaller font.

Some punctuation on your About Me page could perhaps do with a bit of revision.

Page titles need standardisation of capitalisation.

Gallery I would start off with the one in the garden - seeing your place is more relevant than zoos etc.

Nice to look at, easy to read, easy to understand, pages set out logically. Well done.