Help with my book?

[NotYetJKRowling]

I have taken time during my pregnancy to write and publish a book on Amazon

https://www.amazon.co.uk/We-are-Guilty-T-W-Hare-ebook/dp/B0D519HZ3C

it is my effort to tackle the horrors of Trans in a fictional tale, I was hoping for feedback and advice on promoting?

Hey. Its great you've been productive and writen a book. Not many people do so well done.
I had a look at the first few paragraphs in chapter 1. I think the editing could be tighter. For example you have a sentence 60 plus words long. Do you plan on taking another look or are you aiming for sales?

Looking at the description on Amazon it sounds deeply racist.