Please provide some feedback on this. Thanks

[Frenchmum1234]

www.quora.com/profile/Honey-Letaief/Watermelon-Clay-Art-by-Dalila-10-check-out-her-stop-motion-on-https-youtu-be-1_3156FJzY4-Inspired-by-Frida-Kahlo?ch=15&oid=108422630&share=a50b486c&srid=u69Y2V&target_type=post Watermelon stop motion video

kindly note this is made by a 10year old.
feedback needed to complete her Art Project.
thanks

Whenever I press play it vanishes from the screen for some reason, is there another way to view?

Old on try this link:

I love the explosion & the drawn lines that illustrate it actually exploding.
I see it as a winking eye -is that right?
Well timed with the beat of the music & the pieces vanishing.

I hope she enjoyed the process.

Absolutely love that, nice. It’s really snappy and I like them all being in a big pile at the end and seen side on so they are bigger and 3D rather than from above. Hope she had fun making it.

Thank you, yes winking eye and sad/smiling face yes she did enjoyed the process.

Thank you, yes the end picture is to mirror Frida Kalho watermelon painting, hence the side angle.

Liked that it made me smile. My only feeling was the last shot came on a bit quick, before I was able to appreciate the end of the previous scene properly. Good use of stop motion properties, and I loved the winky face.

Thanks, yes it’s a bit abrupt because a couple of frames were removed without editing again the stop motion … they contained personal info. the original is not abrupt and was submitted for her award. Many thanks for you feedback.