I need help.......

[UCM]

I know this is cheeky but I can't really ask RL people as they don't know yet. Also, scared. But I have nearly finished building my website. It's published but I haven't sent it to anyone yet. I asked one RL friend to have a look and they said it wasn't interactive enough. I want some real answers and some real criticism so girls would you mind. I am not plugging it here as you all make you own anyway......I would like to know whether;

it's easy to use
it has the right content
whether its a bit bland or not
any features I have forgotten

I would really really appreciate your help on this.

So here goes

\link{http://www.sarahrobertscards.co.uk\here}

Ah, have just re read it. Thanks

if you do decide to replace copy .. I mis-spelt "requirements" in 2nd para and mucked up my tenses in "I hope you enjoy browsing through my cards as much as I enjoyed creating them."

sorry .. am a bit rusty

Twiglett, did you mean the title as well. I have changed it somewhat. Have a look please.

Bugger spotted requirements but missed enjoyed.

oh the power

I think titles are fine in italics just body copy that becomes difficult to read

your cards are lovely btw

Thank you. It's very good making the cards but bloody hard making the website ok. I really appreciate the feedback BTW and have changed it.

Keep em coming girls

You are good Twiglett! I did look at your site earlier UCM and it looks fab with the changes you have made since. I have one suggestion to add, in your second paragraph:

To see a selection of my designs

Great work UCM.

Well done UCM it looks fab and you have obviously put a lot of time and effort into it. It's very professional looking!

Ta Kiwi

Great looking site.Yes, it is easy to use, and navigate around, and I like that there are personalisation options on your cards.
Yet more pedantry I'm afraid - I clicked on your first female card (flower and tag 1) and female was spelt femail.Also the baby cards wouldn't show me details, but I presume those are just start up probs. I'm v in awe of you making your own website, by the way!

Betty, it's not pedantry at all. I have 36 pages and I can't do this without someone else putting a 'good' eye over it. I have changed it.

You are right I haven't put the links on the baby pages yet, but will be working on it within the next few days.

Thank you so much to all of you as this really helps me out.

UCM...I take my hat off to you girl....you know how knacked I am after sitting for hours on end putting my site together...only I didnt have the will power you have had and gave up and handed my "baby" to the professionals to do....just cant dedicate the time and patience to building the bloomin thing...wish I had stuck it out though because it must feel so much more rewarding to have done it yourself.

UCM it's a great site and easy to use.Your cards look great.I loved the bouquet of flowers and how you put it in a plastic wrapping just like the real thing.

layla--i have just emailed you.

UCM - off to have a look at your site

Thanks loads for your contributions. I do appreciate it.

UCM, hows it going? Just building one of my own and wanted to see how you were getting on.. and get some tips!