I was genuinely shocked. The side glances, her tone of voice, how she talks, the characters. Even the way she holds the bunny (guinea-pig) felt like she was trying to copy all of it but in the ‘olden times’. And it would switch between old language and appropriate clothing and culture of the time to her wearing completely inaccurate outfits, using phrases like “I’m an empath” and “you’re a 10”. The wine drinking from the bottle. The contradiction felt so sloppy. At least go with it either way!
And because of the sarcastic style of writing the fact she is lovesick sounds off (but also like she’s trying to be Fleabag and Hot Priest!) Even her little box or keepsakes including the item from church. It’s actually made it feel totally unoriginal!
I cant finish it and I’m waiting for her to say “I love you” and for him to say “it’ll pass”
AIBU?