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haiku game

190 replies

ZingDramaQueenOfSheeba · 27/05/2021 13:14

write a haiku with the word given by previous poster.
then add a single word to your post for next player. I'll start:

Lovely sun at last
I'll need sunglasses to drive
Oh no! Where are they?

Apples

OP posts:
Ostara212 · 03/06/2021 18:09

Doughnuts are so much more than they were
Glazes, coating, fillings, flavours
I feel overfull but happy.

Fern

CandyLeBonBon · 03/06/2021 18:12

@Ostara212 - not sure if you're aware - haiku is 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables - your poems are really lovely but not strictly haiku? Hope you don't mind me pointing out!

CandyLeBonBon · 03/06/2021 18:15

Fern unfurls slowly,
Brown twigs become leafy green.
Spring is here again

Ostara212 · 03/06/2021 18:25

[quote CandyLeBonBon]@Ostara212 - not sure if you're aware - haiku is 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables - your poems are really lovely but not strictly haiku? Hope you don't mind me pointing out! [/quote]
I know but I saw other posts first and I didn't think we were going with that rule?

Apologies 😳

CandyLeBonBon · 03/06/2021 18:29

@Ostara212 I only saw the trad rules being used so that's what I went with too! - sorry really not wanting to be a dick - just wasn't sure if you knew that's all! Ignore me! Blush

CandyLeBonBon · 03/06/2021 18:30

But you've made me want doughnuts now! Grin

Clawdy · 03/06/2021 19:20

Has to be traditional haiku! Much more fun, trying to do the 5 - 7 - 5 rule.

HunkyPunk · 03/06/2021 20:11

Can we have a word @CandyLeBonBon?
(Not in a 'see me after class' way! Grin)

CandyLeBonBon · 03/06/2021 21:26

@HunkyPunk

Can we have a word *@CandyLeBonBon*? (Not in a 'see me after class' way! Grin)
What have I done???
CandyLeBonBon · 03/06/2021 21:27

Oh! Doh!!!

CandyLeBonBon · 03/06/2021 21:27

Sorry! (Again!)

The word is SKY

Clawdy · 03/06/2021 22:48

So high and so vast
Blue and clear, black and starry
But always changing.

Wine

CandyLeBonBon · 03/06/2021 22:53

Oh how I love thee,
Bottled red oblivion.
Why then, such regret?

Table

HunkyPunk · 04/06/2021 01:21

Monday morning dread.
Breakfast is on the table
Uneaten by me.

Carpet

CandyLeBonBon · 04/06/2021 01:29

Trodden under foot,
Your comfort unacknowledged,
How my toes love you

DOG

Penville · 04/06/2021 09:19

Bark bark bark bark bark
Woof woof woof woof woof woof woof!
So speaketh the dog 🐶

Shell

AliasGrape · 04/06/2021 09:45

Dark and safe in here
You urge me but why would I
Come out of my shell?

Suitcase

guffaux · 04/06/2021 13:55

suitcase in the hall
full of hope or of despair
coming or going?

grasses

guffaux · 04/06/2021 13:57

love penville's - Grin

CandyLeBonBon · 04/06/2021 17:45

bending in the breeze
Determined never to break
the grasses are strong

Plate

Clawdy · 04/06/2021 19:12

Blue and white china
Careful not to drop it now!
Grandma loved that plate.

Tambourine

guffaux · 05/06/2021 18:23

remember that song
hey mister tambourine man
oh my youth- now gone

fire

CaptainCallisto · 05/06/2021 20:09

Washing stinks of smoke.
Nextdoor lit their big fire pit
'fore I got it in 😭

Tyres

HunkyPunk · 05/06/2021 22:13

Beware the stray nails
Which burrow into your tyres
And then your pocket.

Root

echt · 05/06/2021 22:51

To Australians
It means fuck: no more rooting
Around in cupboards

Heat