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Brilliant Margaret Atwood memoir review

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hholiday · 14/11/2025 01:07

By Kathleen Stock https://archive.is/v2z51 and https://unherd.com/2025/11/what-margaret-atwood-got-wrong/

Just wonderful, humane writing that goes closer than anything else I have read to exploring the blind spots in Atwood’s views on gender, as well as expressing delight in her fiction writing. I particularly love these killer closing lines:

But honestly, the idea that, in the near future, Western governments will need to use direct force to make women do market-friendly things against their own interests is now surely, definitively preposterous. The case of genderism — and surrogacy, and “sex work”, for that matter — shows that authorities only need to persuade enough women that certain activities are kind, or glamorous, or nobly self-improving; at which point, tender-hearted armies will rise up to ruthlessly punish dissenters themselves.

What Margaret Atwood got wrong

https://unherd.com/2025/11/what-margaret-atwood-got-wrong/

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OldCrone · 16/11/2025 10:39

GeneralPeter · 16/11/2025 10:12

It could be both of course!
You and your ideas both unpleasant.

Anyway, this’ll be my last post on this thread because Brainworm has a reasonable point and also I must get things done today.

‘No debate’ was a specific stance that sought to block opposing perspectives from being heard. I think everything should be debatable, especially important matters like rights. Authoritarian and brittle to avoid it. Having suggested it didn’t happen you now say it’s good.

Suffragists/ettes: thanks for the quote. I’ll update my view. I’ve read extensive newspaper, parliamentary and pamphlet arguments from the whole period so clearly a mixed picture.

I take it that you and I agree that to the extent those voices were frozen out of the press that that was bad? If you think it’s bad then, why is it good now?

Hate speech/censorship: your view is partisan nonsense.

Three possible positions:
i) sex-based terminology and views are banned, subject to professional censure, account deletion, penalized by judges with the full power of the state, and re-often rewritten even in direct speech.
ii) both permitted as a matter of free speech, and it’s openly contested
iii) gender-based terminology and views are banned [… as above].

Two of those positions are censorship. i and iii. i is what we had/have. We had/have censorship. ii is what we need.

Your view that i is not censorship because you agree with the cause is laughable. If you see iii as censorship then i is too.

If you want to argue for censorship then you need to be brave, informed and articulate enough to make the case. Nothing suggests to me that you are up to the task. Partly, ironically, because of the no debate idea that allowed TRAism to evolve without any serious rigour.

I take it that you and I agree that to the extent those voices were frozen out of the press that that was bad? If you think it’s bad then, why is it good now?

I do find it encouraging that even our resident misogynist is now comparing the feminists fighting against genderism to the suffragettes and suffragists.

OldCrone · 16/11/2025 10:32

"Secondly, the suffragists and suffragettes: in Britain there was extensive coverage in the media and petitions and debates in parliament from
1860s onwards from both sides."

Our resident derailer claimed that this statement was false, and posted a link to a random website as 'evidence'. I know this is a bit of a derail from the literary theme of this thread, but I was interested enough to check Hansard to verify. Obviously it turns out that Howse was wrong. Universal suffrage was debated extensively in parliament from the 1860s onwards as @GeneralPeter stated.

Find in Hansard - Hansard - UK Parliament

Edited to add: Obviously it's more difficult to find out what was said (or not said) in the press at the time and would take more time and effort than the couple of minutes it took to check Hansard.

GeneralPeter · 16/11/2025 10:12

Howseitgoin · 16/11/2025 09:14

I'm 'unpleasant'? Or my ideas more like it…

It could be both of course!
You and your ideas both unpleasant.

Anyway, this’ll be my last post on this thread because Brainworm has a reasonable point and also I must get things done today.

‘No debate’ was a specific stance that sought to block opposing perspectives from being heard. I think everything should be debatable, especially important matters like rights. Authoritarian and brittle to avoid it. Having suggested it didn’t happen you now say it’s good.

Suffragists/ettes: thanks for the quote. I’ll update my view. I’ve read extensive newspaper, parliamentary and pamphlet arguments from the whole period so clearly a mixed picture.

I take it that you and I agree that to the extent those voices were frozen out of the press that that was bad? If you think it’s bad then, why is it good now?

Hate speech/censorship: your view is partisan nonsense.

Three possible positions:
i) sex-based terminology and views are banned, subject to professional censure, account deletion, penalized by judges with the full power of the state, and re-often rewritten even in direct speech.
ii) both permitted as a matter of free speech, and it’s openly contested
iii) gender-based terminology and views are banned [… as above].

Two of those positions are censorship. i and iii. i is what we had/have. We had/have censorship. ii is what we need.

Your view that i is not censorship because you agree with the cause is laughable. If you see iii as censorship then i is too.

If you want to argue for censorship then you need to be brave, informed and articulate enough to make the case. Nothing suggests to me that you are up to the task. Partly, ironically, because of the no debate idea that allowed TRAism to evolve without any serious rigour.

Brainworm · 16/11/2025 09:42

FragilityOfCups · 16/11/2025 09:15

As mentioned before, if you're interested in female writings on the attempts of tiresome misogynists, I recommend Bunbury.

Thanks for the reminder about Bunbury. I think I’ve imagined that the Bunbury threads were once pinned to the top of the board - because logically, this isn’t the way Mumsnet rolls. I’m guessing that it was their popularity kept them there.

Brainworm · 16/11/2025 09:34

TheHereticalOne · 16/11/2025 09:26

I hugely admire Stock's style too. Her clarity and precision of thought shines through. She represents the best of philosophical thinking, in my view. Material Girls didn't lose that quality despite being book-length. I think you could have an extremely satisfying and productive disagreement with her because you could follow her line of logic exactly and work out very quickly precisely where any points of disagreement arose and address them properly. I also don't think that she is focused on being right for its own sake, so if you did change her mind on one point, I think she would accept whatever knock-on consequences that had for her argument. I like Helen Joyce's writing enormously for similar reasons.

That's not the style I like in my fiction, though, where I'm a sucker for an incredibly detailed picture of the setting, character and human emotion!

I agree with your comments about how KS argues. I enjoy the Lesbian Project Podcast she dies with Julie Bindel. She is forthright about her points of disagreement but her manner makes it about the points of disagreement and not the person.

I too like rich, descriptive narratives in fiction, and get absorbed in these when they are about people’s character and how they move through the world Where it’s about the weather, or leaves on a tree I get impatient!

TheHereticalOne · 16/11/2025 09:26

Brainworm · 16/11/2025 09:01

This got me thinking and I’m sitting on the fence, flip flopping between caricatures of ‘no nonsense’ , ‘stiff upper lip’ types and caricatures of long winded and verbose monologues.

I really like Stock’s writing style. I her use of language is simple and accessible - she uses lots of analogies to simplify complex or conceptual points.

I hugely admire Stock's style too. Her clarity and precision of thought shines through. She represents the best of philosophical thinking, in my view. Material Girls didn't lose that quality despite being book-length. I think you could have an extremely satisfying and productive disagreement with her because you could follow her line of logic exactly and work out very quickly precisely where any points of disagreement arose and address them properly. I also don't think that she is focused on being right for its own sake, so if you did change her mind on one point, I think she would accept whatever knock-on consequences that had for her argument. I like Helen Joyce's writing enormously for similar reasons.

That's not the style I like in my fiction, though, where I'm a sucker for an incredibly detailed picture of the setting, character and human emotion!

AmaryllisNightAndDay · 16/11/2025 09:15

TempestTost · 15/11/2025 15:18

But that's just it. It's complicity in oppression by men.

It does not seem to be part of the picture that women are actually oppressing others, including other women, entirely for their own ends, that they are the originators, the leaders, that it isn't some kind of function of "the patriarchy".

It's a massive oversight in terms of seeing women as fully human and it's never going to produce a really accurate understanding of society.

I'm confused by the negatives - who are you saying thinks what? "The Handmaid's Tale" is a picture of a totalitarian patriarchal society, but otherwise I would not have said that a generalised "patriarchy" in which only men apppress women and women are only oppress each other because they are complicit in oppression by men, is a framework that Atwood uses. I think Atwood sees sexism as a force in women's lives, and she explores different aspects of that in her books and very thoroughly in "The Handmaid's Tale" - but it's not the only or even always the most important force. Women bullying each other for all sorts of reasons is very much part of her writing.

Though she does have fun in some of her short pieces with role reversals that work out men's favour anyway - that whatever men do in a society will acquire status.

FragilityOfCups · 16/11/2025 09:15

As mentioned before, if you're interested in female writings on the attempts of tiresome misogynists, I recommend Bunbury.

Howseitgoin · 16/11/2025 09:14

BlueEyedBogWitch · 16/11/2025 09:02

It’s because you’re really unpleasant, I think.

I'm 'unpleasant'? Or my ideas more like it…

Floisme · 16/11/2025 09:03

TheHereticalOne · 16/11/2025 08:18

Yes, though a cynic might also say it had something to do with the fact that Dickens was paid by the word!

Interesting that you say other languages tend to the more verbose (still). I've never heard anybody say that but it's a very interesting observation. I wonder what the average size of vocabulary is, comparatively (between countries and as between people in the UK now vs past).

I do worry about a whittling away of the range of expression, Newspeak style, as well as people becoming more afraid to speak fluently and freely for fear of saying the wrong thing (and knowing they will not be granted the grace of people taking things in the spirit they were intended).

I know what you mean about loss of fluency but I can’t help admiring writers who can express themselves in a few words. I love how Claire Keegan writes - never wasting a single word.

BlueEyedBogWitch · 16/11/2025 09:02

Howseitgoin · 16/11/2025 08:50

Brainworm on cue like clockwork 'bothered' by only one particular 'derailer' not the others who happily have wandered off on who wore it best tangents.

Careful dear, your fragility is showing…

Of course anti censorship expert General Peter is no where to be seen.

Edited

It’s because you’re really unpleasant, I think.

Brainworm · 16/11/2025 09:01

TheHereticalOne · 16/11/2025 08:18

Yes, though a cynic might also say it had something to do with the fact that Dickens was paid by the word!

Interesting that you say other languages tend to the more verbose (still). I've never heard anybody say that but it's a very interesting observation. I wonder what the average size of vocabulary is, comparatively (between countries and as between people in the UK now vs past).

I do worry about a whittling away of the range of expression, Newspeak style, as well as people becoming more afraid to speak fluently and freely for fear of saying the wrong thing (and knowing they will not be granted the grace of people taking things in the spirit they were intended).

This got me thinking and I’m sitting on the fence, flip flopping between caricatures of ‘no nonsense’ , ‘stiff upper lip’ types and caricatures of long winded and verbose monologues.

I really like Stock’s writing style. I her use of language is simple and accessible - she uses lots of analogies to simplify complex or conceptual points.

Howseitgoin · 16/11/2025 08:50

Brainworm · 16/11/2025 08:36

I clicked on this thread, excited to see that it had 176 posts. I really enjoyed the article and was looking forward to reading posters thoughts on it.

There are lots of interesting posts, focussed on the OP and some interesting, related tangents, but I had to search for these between the derailing posts and responses.

Howse is skilled at posting TRA arguments that are low hanging fruit for rational thinking people. It can be difficult to resist posting to ‘set the record straight’, which leads to derailing.

Should we start a number of threads based on Howse’s top talking points and then we can redirect posters who want to discuss these points to those threads?

It’s not lost on me that I am posting about this on a thread about KS’s article, but I have promised myself this is the last time I am going to try and intervene about this particular wasp at any of the picnics I join.

Brainworm on cue like clockwork 'bothered' by only one particular 'derailer' not the others who happily have wandered off on who wore it best tangents.

Careful dear, your fragility is showing…

Of course anti censorship expert General Peter is no where to be seen.

Brainworm · 16/11/2025 08:36

I clicked on this thread, excited to see that it had 176 posts. I really enjoyed the article and was looking forward to reading posters thoughts on it.

There are lots of interesting posts, focussed on the OP and some interesting, related tangents, but I had to search for these between the derailing posts and responses.

Howse is skilled at posting TRA arguments that are low hanging fruit for rational thinking people. It can be difficult to resist posting to ‘set the record straight’, which leads to derailing.

Should we start a number of threads based on Howse’s top talking points and then we can redirect posters who want to discuss these points to those threads?

It’s not lost on me that I am posting about this on a thread about KS’s article, but I have promised myself this is the last time I am going to try and intervene about this particular wasp at any of the picnics I join.

TheHereticalOne · 16/11/2025 08:18

GarlicHound · 16/11/2025 05:09

Total side issue (apologies) but, @Floisme, how on earth can a novel be both long-winded and very tightly plotted? I do think I know what you mean; I confess to skimming paragraphs and pages of Dickens. It's surely to do with the language conventions of the time, though, isn't it? Victorians just used more words - as most other languages still do, English having become verbally economical to the point of meanness.

I occasionally wonder why this is, but only when I'm reminding myself to be more verbose in some other language. It's almost like "using extra words" has become a social crime. I regularly commit this crime while drinking, of course!

Yes, though a cynic might also say it had something to do with the fact that Dickens was paid by the word!

Interesting that you say other languages tend to the more verbose (still). I've never heard anybody say that but it's a very interesting observation. I wonder what the average size of vocabulary is, comparatively (between countries and as between people in the UK now vs past).

I do worry about a whittling away of the range of expression, Newspeak style, as well as people becoming more afraid to speak fluently and freely for fear of saying the wrong thing (and knowing they will not be granted the grace of people taking things in the spirit they were intended).

Howseitgoin · 16/11/2025 08:15

GeneralPeter · 16/11/2025 06:24

Firstly, let’s make sure we are both talking about the same thing: what do you think I’m referring to by ‘no debate’?

Secondly, the suffragists and suffragettes: in Britain there was extensive coverage in the media and petitions and debates in parliament from
1860s onwards from both sides.

You seem to want to argue one topic you are ill-informed on by reference to another one you are ill-informed on.

If I’m wrong, please point me to the media-wide moratorium on presenting those women’s case in their own terms. Because I can point you to IPSO, the BBC, Twitter policy and others.

Thirdly, timelines again. You keep talking about quite recent reference points: JKR on X was five years ago. How long would
you say this has been an issue on MN? And again, you seem totally unaware that Twitter heavily suppressed this issue so that grassroots accounts couldn’t talk freely on it until post 2022. Using sex-based terminology was a bannable offence.

You are the one using the word censorship not me. I’ve talked about suppression. But OK, let’s talk about censorship: are you saving that Twitter policies on that point are not a form of censorship? Or the BBC’s style guide and actions? Or the (old) Equal Treatment Bench Book rules?

Fourthly, I think this issue is one that deserved much more public pushback than it got. I reject however your idea that the importance or justice of a cause is measured by the size of street protests. Especially with the constraints described earlier.

Fifthly, this being a ‘right wing plan’ all along to funnel women to white nationalism? Engage with the evidence please. Who has planned this ‘all along’ and since when? Not the UK media as we’ve covered above. The conservative government that sought to introduce self-ID? The following one that hugely increased non-white immigration? Or the one after that (did Rishi Sunak really lead a white nationalist government)?

You are painting with very broad brush strokes in ways that just don’t match the fact pattern at least for the UK. That’s a polite way for saying you keep getting it wrong in aspect after aspect.

Your go-to ‘are you serious???’ in place of engaging with contrary facts is letting you down. Start with the facts and let that inform your views, not the other way round.

"Firstly, let’s make sure we are both talking about the same thing: what do you think I’m referring to by ‘no debate’?"

Depends on who is saying it. Trans activists use it to correctly to make the point human right's shouldn't up for 'debate'. Bad faith interlocutors like JK Rowling cynically misrepresent this concept as censorship.

"Secondly, the suffragists and suffragettes: in Britain there was extensive coverage in the media and petitions and debates in parliament from
1860s onwards from both sides."

False.

"In 1912 Emmeline Pankhurst addressed the difficult relationship women in the suffrage campaign experienced with the press. She approached the stand at the Old Bailey and explained that, ‘..then in 1905 we faced the hard facts. We realised that there was a press boycott against women’s suffrage. Our speeches at public meetings were not reported, our letters to the editors were not published, even if we implored the editors; even the things relating to Women’s Suffrage in Parliament were not recorded. They said the subject was not of sufficient public interest to be reported in the press, and they were not prepared to report it’. This speech confirms categorically the existence of a press war between suffrage and anti-suffrage advocates.
Vital to spreading information about their cause, print press media became an invaluable source for those fighting for and against the progression of women’s emancipation. Nevertheless, historical intervention concerning the women’s suffrage movement has traditionally focused on books and biographies written by leaders of the movement rather than the multitude of texts in the print press media. Many of these books, although considered primary sources, were often written up to ten years after the suffrage movement. As it was only the higher classes that had the money and influence to take a book to publication, our understanding has become dictated by the voices of the middle and upper-classes resulting in the opinions of many lower-classes being disregarded. Consequently, it is inevitable that opinions and information will be missed, whether accidentally or on purpose.

The suffrage movement seemed to act as a catalyst for newspapers to represent women negatively. It received a tirade of negative press from the most widely read newspapers such as The Times, The Pall Mall Gazette, and The Telegraph. Suffragist women were ‘masculine’, the men were ‘effeminate’, and suffragettes were ‘feral’, ‘aggressive’, and ‘irrational’.
https://aspectsofhistory.com/iwd-the-press-and-womens-suffrage/

And again, you seem totally unaware that Twitter heavily suppressed this issue so that grassroots accounts couldn’t talk freely on it until post 2022. Using sex-based terminology was a bannable offence.

JKR has been at it for 5 years now so that's pre Elon:

In a tweet in 2019, Rowling stood with Forstater: "Dress however you please," she said on X. "Live your best life in peace and security. But force women out of their jobs for stating that sex is real?"

"And again, you seem totally unaware that Twitter heavily suppressed this issue so that grassroots accounts couldn’t talk freely on it until post 2022. Using sex-based terminology was a bannable offence.

Given all of JKR's pre Elon tweets passed muster because she implicitly dehumanised & demonised transpeople via dog whistles rather than explicitly as is the case now, its fair to say it was overt hate speech that was censored.

"You are the one using the word censorship not me. I’ve talked about suppression. But OK, let’s talk about censorship: are you saving that Twitter policies on that point are not a form of censorship? Or the BBC’s style guide and actions? Or the (old) Equal Treatment Bench Book rules?"

Sure, hate speech was suppressed. But yeah, I get how that may appear as censorship for the unconscionable….

"Fifthly, this being a ‘right wing plan’ all along to funnel women to white nationalism? Engage with the evidence please. Who has planned this ‘all along’ and since when? Not the UK media as we’ve covered above. The conservative government that sought to introduce self-ID? The following one that hugely increased non-white immigration? Or the one after that (did Rishi Sunak really lead a white nationalist government)?"

Right wing parties seeking election trot out the trans bogeyman like clock work as do all their many powerful media operatives. That you think there's no such thing as the right wing propaganda complex with their usual suspects of LGBTQ 'degenerate' fear mongering is cute & maybe a function of being a hapless/willing victim of it.

IWD: The Press and Women’s Suffrage - Aspects of History

The Women's Suffrage movement is best understood through the press and newspapers of the day, so argues Amelia Bashford.

https://aspectsofhistory.com/iwd-the-press-and-womens-suffrage/

Floisme · 16/11/2025 07:56

GarlicHound · 16/11/2025 05:09

Total side issue (apologies) but, @Floisme, how on earth can a novel be both long-winded and very tightly plotted? I do think I know what you mean; I confess to skimming paragraphs and pages of Dickens. It's surely to do with the language conventions of the time, though, isn't it? Victorians just used more words - as most other languages still do, English having become verbally economical to the point of meanness.

I occasionally wonder why this is, but only when I'm reminding myself to be more verbose in some other language. It's almost like "using extra words" has become a social crime. I regularly commit this crime while drinking, of course!

I say that because I find that, if I try and skim his wordier passages, I inevitably miss an important plot point and 50 pages on, I’m lost and have to go back and read properly. I see it as a failing on my part and I imagine it’s due to the faster pace of life now and also TV, where you expect something to happen every few minutes and where it’s easy to switch off if it doesn’t. We’ve got used to instant gratification - we don’t even have to wait a week between episodes any more. I couldn’t be bothered with Dickens at all when I was young but now I’ve learned that, if I slow down and ‘get in the zone’ , I can find them really absorbing and satisfying.

Likewise with JK Rowling, my concentration will wander and I’ve often lost the thriller aspect of the plot by the halfway stage, but I still read on because I want to know how the relationships pan out. I find it with a lot of crime fiction (Chandler aside!) so it’s not just JK, although the Strike books seem to be getting longer and longer!

BlueEyedBogWitch · 16/11/2025 07:51

That I don't comment there is a function of my self awareness that I don't have the legal expertise required to speak with confidence.

Shame your ‘self awareness’ doesn’t expand to accepting that, as a man, you have no idea of the impact of your ideology on the physical and mental wellbeing of women.

NeelyOHara · 16/11/2025 07:31

What the fuck would some bloke in New Zealand know about what’s going on with women, on the other side of the world?
Stop feeding the skank. It’s tiresome and makes the thread unreadable, which is his sole aim.

GeneralPeter · 16/11/2025 06:24

Howseitgoin · 15/11/2025 22:53

'No debate'? Seriously? How much 'debate' did the Suffragettes get? The facts of the matter are when an issue seriously affects women at scale, they will come out at scale. The Climate Change, Metoo & Palestine protests were spear headed by millions of women globally.

Hiding behind 'censorship' is a joke given the reach of the internet & major right wing media outlets with millions of followers that have been pushing this issue relentlessly. JK Rowling alone has 14 million followers on X not to mention Right wing Political parties have been weaponising this issue globally.

Not only is there no widespread public outrage, its now reaching its past use by date as a political cudgel being replaced by immigration…..which was always the plan. Gender ideology was merely used as a gate way to the right to funnel women so they could get more on board with white nationalism. Now they don't need it anymore you won't be hearing about from them who in essence were the engine behind its ascendance not a few useful idiots on X & MN.

Firstly, let’s make sure we are both talking about the same thing: what do you think I’m referring to by ‘no debate’?

Secondly, the suffragists and suffragettes: in Britain there was extensive coverage in the media and petitions and debates in parliament from
1860s onwards from both sides.

You seem to want to argue one topic you are ill-informed on by reference to another one you are ill-informed on.

If I’m wrong, please point me to the media-wide moratorium on presenting those women’s case in their own terms. Because I can point you to IPSO, the BBC, Twitter policy and others.

Thirdly, timelines again. You keep talking about quite recent reference points: JKR on X was five years ago. How long would
you say this has been an issue on MN? And again, you seem totally unaware that Twitter heavily suppressed this issue so that grassroots accounts couldn’t talk freely on it until post 2022. Using sex-based terminology was a bannable offence.

You are the one using the word censorship not me. I’ve talked about suppression. But OK, let’s talk about censorship: are you saving that Twitter policies on that point are not a form of censorship? Or the BBC’s style guide and actions? Or the (old) Equal Treatment Bench Book rules?

Fourthly, I think this issue is one that deserved much more public pushback than it got. I reject however your idea that the importance or justice of a cause is measured by the size of street protests. Especially with the constraints described earlier.

Fifthly, this being a ‘right wing plan’ all along to funnel women to white nationalism? Engage with the evidence please. Who has planned this ‘all along’ and since when? Not the UK media as we’ve covered above. The conservative government that sought to introduce self-ID? The following one that hugely increased non-white immigration? Or the one after that (did Rishi Sunak really lead a white nationalist government)?

You are painting with very broad brush strokes in ways that just don’t match the fact pattern at least for the UK. That’s a polite way for saying you keep getting it wrong in aspect after aspect.

Your go-to ‘are you serious???’ in place of engaging with contrary facts is letting you down. Start with the facts and let that inform your views, not the other way round.

Ereshkigalangcleg · 16/11/2025 05:26

CohensDiamondTeeth · 15/11/2025 19:16

Also laughing at him because of his whole "if an attempt to censor women fails, it doesn't count as censorship" 😂What a numpty! 😂

On another website I was once told that there was no problem at all with discrimination against gender critical feminists, because Maya Forstater won her tribunal, which proved that there wasn’t anything to worry about 🤪

NecessaryScene · 16/11/2025 05:17

It's surely to do with the language conventions of the time, though, isn't it?

Yes, but compounded by the fact that Dickens novels were written and published as serials.

And "you can’t skip a few pages in case you miss something crucial" would have been a desirable feature - if you're a magazine publisher confident enough that there's enough reader interest to merit a long-running serial, you're going to want to lean into that to make sure readers feel compelled to buy every single issue during its run.

Quite different commercial environment to Chandler.

GarlicHound · 16/11/2025 05:09

Total side issue (apologies) but, @Floisme, how on earth can a novel be both long-winded and very tightly plotted? I do think I know what you mean; I confess to skimming paragraphs and pages of Dickens. It's surely to do with the language conventions of the time, though, isn't it? Victorians just used more words - as most other languages still do, English having become verbally economical to the point of meanness.

I occasionally wonder why this is, but only when I'm reminding myself to be more verbose in some other language. It's almost like "using extra words" has become a social crime. I regularly commit this crime while drinking, of course!

moto748e · 15/11/2025 23:29

Agree about Dickens. Sometimes I think, he should read Raymond Chandler!

Floisme · 15/11/2025 23:13

TempestTost · 15/11/2025 15:28

I think she needs an editor with a lot of backbone. That's not a criticism at all, I think many (most) great writers probably need someone like this, it is too difficult to see, from inside the book, what needs to be pared away. (Although the ones who practice their craft as journalists first I think may have an advantage to some extent.)

But she's so big as a writer, I think it makes is harder for an editor to be firm.

Yes, I’ve lost count the number of times I’ve got to the end of an award winning contemporary novel and thought, ‘That book really needed a good editor’. Are there any left in publishing?

But to be fair, I’ve thought the same about Dickens - great stories and characters but my god, he was verbose. And because his novels are so tightly plotted, you can’t skip a few pages in case you miss something crucial.