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Thoughts on what I’m writing?

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Historyguy · 10/06/2025 00:03

I am trying to write a novel but it’s pissing off two women I know.

The problem they have is my villain, Abigail Williams (she’s a real person who was used in the Crucible, but given the fact that she really did exist, she’s fair game).

She will be 40 because the novel is set in 1720, as she was only 11 or 12 in the real witch trials.

At this point, the money she stole will have gotten her far in life and now she’s a wealthy widow of a merchant in Barbados.

She continues to do what she did as a child, create moral panics and mass hysteria to get innocents killed (now they are her enemies she’s framing as pirates).

her greatest nemesis is a fictional daughter of Sarah Osborne that I invented. Abigail will try to get her hung for piracy.

Thoughts?

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WagnersFourthSymphony · 10/06/2025 01:51

marshmallowpuff · 10/06/2025 01:25

It’s a novel. You can write her any way you like!

Absolutely!
But if your novel is going to reference the play, you're taking on a helluva lot of baggage, some of which you may prefer to dump. Sowhy start from there?

marshmallowpuff · 10/06/2025 01:25

It’s a novel. You can write her any way you like!

CautiousLurker01 · 10/06/2025 01:24

What’s her character arc? Does she change as a result of the events of the story and if so how? Does she grow? Who/what is her nemesis and why? How do they inform her character growth? If she’s ‘just nasty’ then, yeah, it’ll likely be seen by women as misogynistic.

WagnersFourthSymphony · 10/06/2025 01:00

I dunno. Maybe my view is skewed by similar asymmetric relationships I knew were going on at the time, but I always saw it as a play written from the man's point of view and thought maybe a teenage kid got carried away and maybe John Proctor wasn't as innocent as all that.

Historyguy · 10/06/2025 00:45

Some people never change.

it’s going to be hard to write her in a sympathetic way.

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WagnersFourthSymphony · 10/06/2025 00:32

You what? You are suggesting she hasn 't matured? Your scenario casts back a light on the teenage Abigail that suggests she was maybe as guilty then as she is now. Stick of rock. Maybe you don't mean to suggest that a child's moral failure will dog them through life, but that's what I'm reading from it.

Historyguy · 10/06/2025 00:24

lnks · 10/06/2025 00:13

Did you mean to post this in FWR?There are other sections of MN which might be able to give you creative writing tips.

No, I need to know if my portrayal of her is misogynistic in anyway.

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lnks · 10/06/2025 00:13

Did you mean to post this in FWR?There are other sections of MN which might be able to give you creative writing tips.

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