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Haiku for this morning anyone?

198 replies

sunchowder · 03/10/2003 01:08

Alrighty then! New rules for Haiku. I will have a go at this, I hope that I will find more great ones when I wake up!
Birth:

Pushing, Reeling, Clutching
Baby in my arms
She is smiling

October:

Pumpkins, apples, and cinnamon
The wind is up
leaves turn brown and crisp

OP posts:
Forestfly · 10/12/2003 00:21

He is just the man
With a unique attitude
in my small village

lilibet · 10/12/2003 00:21

will we talk like this
when we meet in Manchester?
we will be thought odd!!

Forestfly · 10/12/2003 00:25

Dinner we will book
For haiku not mumsnetters
Internet is sad

lilibet · 10/12/2003 00:28

internet is good
i love all my cyber friends
I know you do too

Forestfly · 10/12/2003 00:30

I do very much
My friends think i'm a nutter
They don't know the love

Forestfly · 10/12/2003 00:32

I still have no clue
What to leave in my handbag
It will be funny

lilibet · 10/12/2003 00:37

night night forestfly
leave him a lovely haiku
suggestions below!!

this is dp's!:

please ring my owner
you won't be disappointed
remember me now??

Forestfly · 10/12/2003 00:43

Goodnight you lilly
You really do sound lovely
I will email you

I will be drinking
when you play at the bakers
I hope you are good

lilibet · 10/12/2003 00:44

He is very good
I am a lucky woman
you soon will be too

Forestfly · 10/12/2003 00:47

I hope i will be
Don't want to turn to slapper
but i need a shag

lilibet · 10/12/2003 00:48

Nothing wrong with that
occasional one night stands
can boost your ego

Forestfly · 10/12/2003 00:49

They don't boost myself
I will not treat a boyfriend
unless it is real

Janstar · 11/12/2003 09:06

Sorry everyone - my tutor didn't get around to this on Tuesday. I told him to leave it till last cos there was lots of 'proper' work to get through i.e. strictly the work of people who were there.

I left it with him when I left, just to read for his own amusement, and I'm sure he will comment next Tues.

By the way he is an 80-odd year old man who knows everything there is to know about creative writing. Thankfully he has the most open of minds too! It ran to 25 pages when I printed it out - and now it's longer - glad you started composing again!

Haiku exercise
Lifts the mind and the spirit
From our mundane chores.

lilibet · 16/01/2004 14:05

Did he ever comment on us Janstar?

Festivefly · 16/01/2004 14:35

Scratch the last haiku
I will sleep with anyone
It has been that long

turnupthebass · 16/01/2004 14:46

Moon Under Water
Prepare yourselves for F F!
Girl on a mission!

JanH · 16/01/2004 15:37

LOL, you two!

turnupthebass · 16/01/2004 16:04

the names on the screen
will have faces tomorrow!
(some of them at least )

lilibet · 16/01/2004 22:11

I am so nervous
Feel like an eighteen year old
Not such a bad thing!

Janstar · 17/01/2004 11:27

My tutor didn't say a lot! I think I wore him out, he had his 2nd heart bypass op only a few weeks ago... poor thing

CountessDracula · 17/01/2004 12:59

After holiday
Strawberry will finally
make it home at last!

Tortington · 17/01/2004 23:50

limerick anyone?

there once was a girl called louise
who had pubic hair to her knees
her crabs clubbed together
to knit her a sweater
so in winter her c**t wouln't freeze

sb34 · 17/01/2004 23:51

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