Thank you Help.
Any chance for links to the other threads?
re wording: I feel that the "religious or cultural traditions" part at the end doesn't quite tie in with the first paragraph. What doe others think?
On New Year’s Eve, women across Europe were subjected to mass assault. UK women must be free to travel, work and live, without experiencing sexual violence or other hate crimes. We ask the government to debate and enforce measures to uphold women's rights irrespective of religious or cultural traditions. 257
How about
On New Year’s Eve, women across Europe were subjected to mass assault. UK women must be free to travel, work and live, without experiencing intimidation, sexual violence or other hate crime. We ask the government to debate and enforce measures to uphold women's rights in a culturally diverse society. 253
Not sure.