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To cry at this? Did you?

222 replies

Sandals12 · 13/12/2023 15:53

Yabu- I didnt cry

Yanbu- I did or nearly cried

Written by a relative...stick it out to the end (2 minute read). Feedback welcome

What Christmas means to me.

“Are you all set for Christmas?” we hear,
A question that always strikes fear.

No, the Elf is not on the shelf,
Nor have I ordered the turkey or beer,
The cards haven't been sent,
On presents, not a penny spent!

However, when December rolls around,
I will only be found,
Knee deep in glitter,
With tinsel up to my ears.

To me, this is what Christmas has always been.

Then carol singing and school plays,
And itchy Christmas jumper days,
Indulgent food and mulled wine,
Praying Amazon arrives on time!
Work dos with uncomfortable shoes,
Drinking plenty of ….juice.

Time with family and friends, and festive fun.
Isn't it the same for everyone?

Decoration and dessert preparation,
Advent Calendar anticipation,
The whole house now smells like a cinnamon roll…
How long is left to go?

At last, the big day arrives and Santa has been,
The living room carpet can no longer be seen,
Under plastic, cardboard, wrapping and more,
“Next year…we are NOT going overboard!”

Home Alone on the box and novelty socks,
Too many treats, turkey sleeps, The King's Speech!
Then Pringles…on repeat.
This is what Christmas means to me…

Me…me..
So blinded by the Christmas lights,
Shopping and food delights,
So wrapped up in preparing gifts,
Entertaining and Santa visits,
That I couldn't even stop and bother
To look and see,
What the season brings for others.
Me...How blind I've been.

For both far and near,
Some will not be feeling such festive cheer.

There's a world we cannot know,
Far away from ours,
Where ashes fall like snow,
And missiles obscure the stars.

These lives have become undone,
Where's the joy? Where's the fun?
Displaced from where they once called home.
“Mummy, how will Santa know where to come?”

There’s local children, who know Santa only as fable,
Told “He'll bring what he is able”,
Who will have to queue for a seat at a Christmas table.

The family on the nice side of the street,
Wanting for nothing with the world at their feet,
Who'd now trade all their Christmas wishes,
For a day with Daddy whose death was 'not suspicious'.

A neighbour over the fence,
Responds to friendly banter,
But wears sunglasses in winter,
A raised glass will mean dire consequence.

And wee Granny, who once made Christmas lunch for all,
Her family now hung on the wall,
Of whose names she can't recall.
“We'll take her out for the day”, they say.

...And the bells are ringing out for Christmas Day.

OP posts:
gwenneh · 13/12/2023 15:55

YABU.

KatBurglar · 13/12/2023 15:57

It doesn't work for me at all, I'm afraid.

OwOwHolyCow · 13/12/2023 15:57

YABU

I get the sentiment but it’s a difficult read, it’s a bit too clunky.

tabbymctwat · 13/12/2023 16:01

Appreciate the sentiment but it doesn't scan well at all and the rhyming pattern chops and changes throughout (and some bits randomly don't rhyme at all) which makes it really difficult to read. Sorry, but it's quite badly written

PamelaParis · 13/12/2023 16:03

Did you cry because it's a really bad poem?

FuckingHellAdele · 13/12/2023 16:04

Nope sorry.

WhyMeWhyNowWhyNot · 13/12/2023 16:05

I get the sentiment but I can’t bear rhyming poems where the rhyme is really forced 😬.

EarringsandLipstick · 13/12/2023 16:06

Sorry, it's dreadful. I understand the sentiment but it's toe-curlingly cringey, especially Granny at the end.

LBFseBrom · 13/12/2023 16:06

No, I don't care for sentimental verse but each to their own.

EarringsandLipstick · 13/12/2023 16:06

And wee Granny, who once made Christmas lunch for all,
Her family now hung on the wall,
Of whose names she can't recall.

I mean, this doesn't even make sense.

Excited101 · 13/12/2023 16:07

There’s some nice thoughts in there but it’s not for me. Christmas as it’s ’always been’ is hardly about Amazon parcels is it. It’s a bit saccharine. Did a teenager write it?

MarleyandMarleyWoooo · 13/12/2023 16:07

That’s.. not great. I certainly didn’t cry.

EarringsandLipstick · 13/12/2023 16:07

Sorry OP, I see you say it was written by a relative and didn't mean to be harsh.

If it has meaning for you as a family, that's what's important.

Nimblesandbimbles · 13/12/2023 16:15

Ummm not great OP I’m afraid. It feels very forced in terms of trying to get you to feel stuff. Very heavy handed & sentimental. I don’t understand this bit:

A neighbour over the fence,
Responds to friendly banter,
But wears sunglasses in winter,
A raised glass will mean dire consequence

Whatevershallidowithmylife · 13/12/2023 16:17

God that's depressing but not crying depressing

Funderthighs · 13/12/2023 16:19

YABU. That’s mawkish (and not very well written).

Remagirl · 13/12/2023 16:19

No, not my thing at all.

Wishimaywishimight · 13/12/2023 16:20

Trying a bit too hard to include everyone I think. Certainly didn't make me cry.

Sorry OP, I presume it was written by a young person so perhaps anyone emotionally attached would find it touching.

BrightLightTonight · 13/12/2023 16:22

Not for me - sorry

Hatty65 · 13/12/2023 16:24

It's so hard to read as it scans so badly. For me, it screams 'Amateur poet (or young child) who doesn't really understand how poetry works, or how to write'.

It makes me cringe. I hate poor writing.

misssunshine4040 · 13/12/2023 16:24

YABU. It's badly written.

However I really resent being forced to feel guilty if I enjoy Christmas.
I don't need reminding that life is shit for so many, it's patronising.

Many who are facing missile strikes don't even celebrate Christmas so it's really unpleasant to suggest they are wondering where Santa will deliver the presents....

PinkyU · 13/12/2023 16:25

EarringsandLipstick · 13/12/2023 16:06

And wee Granny, who once made Christmas lunch for all,
Her family now hung on the wall,
Of whose names she can't recall.

I mean, this doesn't even make sense.

It’s to infer that the granny has no one visiting her, perhaps in a care home (her family hung on the wall) and that she is suffering from Alzheimer’s/dementia (names she can’t recall).

That she has forgotten but has also been forgotten.

misssunshine4040 · 13/12/2023 16:26

Oh and I have had my fair share of awful Christmases due to various horrible reasons and I did not hope that others were sparing a thought for me.

timeforacoffeebreak · 13/12/2023 16:27

I used to dabble in poetry, I'd love to take the time to rewrite this... but that would be unreasonable of me I think.

givemushypeasachance · 13/12/2023 16:29

Very "Chicken Soup for the Soul", to be shared on Facebook alongside other schmaltzy content.

Why are you posting something "written by a relative" on mumsnet asking if it made people cry? Why did the relative write it?