You can't get from your kitchen to the dining room without traipsing in through hall and living room. Can you put a door or an entry between the kitchen and the dining area?
Master bedroom is long and thin and you've got photos of 3 rooms with beds. I'm guessing the cramped grey room is the long thin one with the ensuite, which puts me off.
Outdoor area features a huge brick wall. Bad shot on part of the photographer, and it looks to be a very small space which was shot with a macro lens, so it's slightly distorting and heavily emphasizing brick wall. Put up colourful trellis and potted plants in front to soften it.
Lovely decor throughout. Neutral but with personality left in it.