"Pinkchampchoccies Fri 15-Jan-16 20:18:53 and 2016IsANewYearforMe
I know it is not your petition. I am waiting for you to decide on the text. I wanted to let you know what is out there circulating. I ve not signed it. I dont know who is the person who started it either."
I'm not sure what you mean 
"It's not my version! It's been refined by dozens of posters of several days we must all be pedants."
My post was in response to people saying 'I like Pink's version' I don't take credit for work I didn't do so I posted to clarify that many posters had collectively edited the text, which was great stuff.
Either way, I think it is important not to connect the first paragraph 'mass sex assault' with 'religious/cultural attitudes' in the last paragraph. This as there was nothing religious about the attacks and Islam does not condone such things. It's illogical. There is a cultural element to the mass sex attacks, obviously, as they have been imported from a specific cultural setting, i.e. parts of North Africa.
I have had a little time to think and we must not (imo) connect the attacks to religion because we have a huge Muslim community in the UK and have luckily not witnessed this kind of thing.
I prefer something like this:
On New Year’s Eve, women across the EU were subjected to mass sex assaults. UK women must be free to travel, work and live without intimidation or sexual violence. We ask the government to debate and enforce measures to uphold women's rights irrespective of contrary cultural attitudes. (286 with spaces)