deedee that article is a bit clichéd isn't it: "men like to talk over women".
"For everyone, but particularly for women and subjugated others, the independence discussion has been a massively positive experience: we have found our voice, reached out to our neighbours, activated our networks, and discovered the power and influence that each of us could have. We must maintain the level of engagement that we are currently experiencing."
I'm not subjugated, the biggest attempts at subjugation and patronising I've ever experienced in my life have been on here and from yes campaigners, and not at work. I have no problems "finding my voice" or discovering my power.
Do you really think I will go "Yes, that one internet article I happened to read has totally devolved me of my entire life experience and education" or am I more likely to read it as a list of random propaganda, some of which stands well enough on its own, but not buy into what its trying to sell?
You are misjudging your target audience.