Re the shoot
Can we really have something as dramatic as a shooting?
How about ed makes a mistake leading to the guns not enjoying themselves or something. He doesn't get paid (increasing bad blood with will) and is banned from BL for evermore this further spiralling into despair.
Ed is a good case study in how hard t can be to make a decent living in rural areas
I don't think will was being too bad to ed - he wasn't paying the original guy more and he must have a budget that this puts under pressure. I thought it sounded like a conversation between two men who are at the edge