Ok. Brutally honest and I actually don’t think it’s much you can change, although maybe different photos would help.
start with the positive- upstairs layout is nice, the rooms are good sizes. I personally don’t like the enclosed toilet/sink units but that’s just decor.
overall I love the colours and decor generally. And don’t even mind the boxes 🤣
it’s outside and downstairs that would mean I don’t view. Outside is just boring and unappealing. No front door, just a garage door.
your sofa looks like it’s been parked in the hallway. Is the living room that long and thin? It looks more like a corridor than a room.
I also can’t figure out which end the kitchen it at? It looks like the kitchen is at the living room end so you have to walk through it to get to the table? If so it would make more sense to me to have the diner accessible from the kitchen, then make the living space more of a “room” with the fireplace. If you follow me.
new photos of the front from an angle showing the front door and reducing the impact of the garage door? and of the living room/diner so it looks less like a corridor.