what would you change about the campaign?
Labour campaigning unambiguously for remain, possibly (given EU membership had been settled policy for 20 years) including expelling Stewart.
Positive discussion of economic benefits, rather than negative discussion of problems caused by leaving (same facts, different presentation).
Corbyn campaigning with Cameron.
More work on mobilising the young vote.
Genuine admission that A8 migration has not been an unalloyed benefit for British workers, and. Proposals to mitigate that.
A campaign that didn't just talk about London.
Effective leadership, not a washed up loser like Alan Johnsom talking crap about how you needed a visa to go to Spain in 1976, which just made him look stupid to anyone old enough to remember (you did need your passport to get travel money because of exchange control: look up who abolished that).
Shutting fucking Izard up.
Reading about why Yes to AV failed, and not making all the same mistakes.
Not running a campiaign based on yelling "now listen to me, poor people, I am middle class and know what is good for you even if you do not"
Need I go on?