Wowsers
That's better! By miles. Two women quoted. ACAS top exec and Meno charity woman. Stats. Easy to read and understand.
Shame if you click for more info you get all that stuff from before though!
If you are watching this thread ACAS.
Top marks for new header page. Very good. Like it.
Now you need to do a quick clean up of the pages linked to. And all is golden!
IMO it's a bad idea to suggest that any changes in any hormonal treatment should be included in this blurb.
Write a separate page about different groups and hormone therapies, bearing in mind that both women and men can receive these for a variety of reasons.
Link to it from Meno page if you wish. Or a separate trans topic. In fact trans topic with specifics would be great.
By all means talk about hormonal therapies. Many are sensitive eg men being treated for T levels way lower than expected. now that is sensitive.
But please make the follow up pages clear as well.
Remember-
Clarity is everything.
It's ok to talk about things specific to male/ female.
A section to talk about specific challenges for eg trans people is best all round.