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Our Girl and Captain James Discussion thread Volume VI

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icemist · 05/12/2014 13:55

Feel free to join in as we discuss all things Our Girl related

Honorary Members of the CJ Collective:
Ben Aldridge
Tony Grounds
Lacey Turner

Our Girl and Captain James Discussion thread Volume VI
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Rhubarb01 · 07/12/2014 20:26

What have we learned?

You can laugh, be inspired to try things you've never done before and have more fun than you've had for years talking to a group of people you've never met!

icemist · 07/12/2014 20:27

that last one is about 'Our Zombie Girl' Grin

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Ilovelblue · 07/12/2014 20:34

I think I noticed ThreadNneedle's ID on there when I looked this morning and there were a couple of comments from other writers. I decided to get my own ID and then managed to mess it up somehow and there doesn't seem to be anywhere on that website to go for help!

icemist · 07/12/2014 20:34

I knew our fiction (obviously my contribution is in publishing) was brilliant, its so lovely to see other people appreciate it too.

I'd encourage everyone to read our reviews, they have certainly brightened up this rainy night for me.

I have searched and searched for info on what BA is filming in Canada and cannot find anything. I've looked at people who are following him as well to see if that can shed any light on it. Who's friend said it wan't for the network she works for? That could narrow my the search down

All I can think of is that its another pilot or an series that they want to keep his character/appearance from public knowedge??

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Ilovelblue · 07/12/2014 20:37

You are IT Director and Head of Publishing icemist.

AuroraDR · 07/12/2014 20:41

It was my friend icemist and I did post the other day to say he was not working for anything for her company, but she was going to dig a bit and get back to me.

I forgot to ask which production company she works for as she has moved about a hit over the last few years. I will pop her a follow up email and enquire. We may be able to work out what his not filming from that.

I will update you as soon as she gets back to me

AuroraDR · 07/12/2014 20:42

Excuse the spelling trying to type and see on my phone in a moving car.

icemist · 07/12/2014 20:53

thank you AuroraDR

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cherin · 07/12/2014 21:02

Ahahahah, nickel:
It's remarkably easy to cover up the fact that you aren't thinking about what you are supposed to be thinking about
Very very true!! I actually found that out a few years ago when DS1 started his passion for video games and talked me over and over about details. He's now aware I dont give a toss but talks anyway, just because he has to share. I had to confess, after he started doing me interrogations. (I never, ever, was one for video games. So you know. It's not personal. I just can't stand them. I am crap even at table tennis on the wii sport. That bad!)

pixieg1rl · 07/12/2014 21:27

Anyone watching this programme on C4 on dismantling Bastion (well C4+1)? The place is incredible.

Richtea19 · 07/12/2014 21:35

pixie I saw that being advertised but forgot all about it. I expect you can see it on 4OD.

I'm doing a bit of internet christmas shopping and have found some cute napkins MD doe and CJ stag. I'm wondering if I should get them for the Christmas table or is it a bit extreme on Christmas Day!

Our Girl and Captain James Discussion thread Volume VI
Our Girl and Captain James Discussion thread Volume VI
pixieg1rl · 07/12/2014 21:40

One of the lookout posts had a paddling pool. The cpt in charge of dismantling said 'this one comes with a jacuzzi'

apsara03 · 07/12/2014 22:01

Have recorded it pixie was making mince pies with episode 1 on you tube.

Ilovelblue · 07/12/2014 22:08

I am supposed to be doing something for work tonight. I am soooo in trouble tomorrow morning if I turn up without some documents. Not sure if my boss would accept that I find creative writing far more interesting than report writing. Guess I have to stay up till midnight to sort it. Once I got the bit between my teeth, I've done the Molly's diary on the Bashira day. I may have gone a bit further than Rhubarb intended and not stuck to her brief but I had to get in a bit about MD and CJ's feelings. Please let me know if you think it needs condensing. I did ramble more than I intended.

Here it is.

MOLLY’S DIARY
THE DAY BASHIRA WAS TAKEN AWAY

Today must rate as the worst day ever in my life. When you join the army, you know you could be sent to a war zone at any time and you are sort of prepared for it by those above you, but seeing a young girl strapped into a suicide vest is definitely the stuff nightmares are made of.

I’m sitting in my med tent on my own. I just need some space and I won’t get it with the rest of the lads around. Although they’re in shock too I think, they’re acting like typical men, bluffing it out and pretending they’re all real tough nuts who signed up for all this drama.

I know I’d annoyed Captain James by getting too close to this young girl called Bashira. Men just seem to be able to separate themselves from all this emotional shit. Women think differently. Smurf even said something sarcastic to him about me being the type to bring home a stray donkey from Spain. Well, I’d never been away from London till I came here and there’s no room for any sort of animal at home. It’s enough of a circus with all my brothers and sisters, not to mention my Mum and Dad, but yes, if there was space, I would probably have brought a stray cat or dog back; maybe not a donkey though. Bossman then called me Queen of the Lost Cause.

Bashira is such a lovely little girl – she reminds me so much of my sister, Bella, as they are about the same age. I’ve given her pens and sweets when we’ve seen her whilst we’ve been out on patrol. The Boss wasn’t happy about that either. Smurf thought she was a spy of some sort for the Taliban and even Captain James seemed to think it was possible – after all, she did appear quite a lot when there was trouble. Her father had seen me once playing a game with her and had shouted at her to come away. He’d beaten her up soon afterwards and Bashira and her mother came crying to the FOB, wanting me to dress the cuts. Qaseem had to translate for me but I got the gist of the conversation that the mother thought it was all my fault. Captain James was livid. I could tell by the way the pulse was beating in his neck, even though he was fairly controlled. He eventually relented and let me treat the cuts but he had kept on saying she should be going to her local hospital which it turned out was four hours away. Four hours, can you imagine it? I expected to be severely reprimanded for insisting I at least cleaned up the cuts and all things considered, I got off fairly lightly.

Bashira had given me some intel about an attack at the mountain pass as a result of that. I had to pass it on to James, even though at first I’m not even sure he was very interested as he was in his paddling pool and then the Music Corps arrived. Smurf convinced me we had to tell him so when we did, he dragged us into the Ops Tent with Kinders and Major Beck. He seemed a bit cynical at first, but Major Beck understood more that I had built up a relationship with Bashira and that she had learned to trust me. I never really intended anything if am honest, but it’s just the sort of person I am.

Later on, they’d realised Bashira had been compromised by telling us about the attack in the mountains and the Boss came in at some ungodly hour in the middle of the night and shook me awake as they needed to act on it (I even thought I must have overslept). There were a couple of Afghans in the Ops Tent when I went in with them. They seemed to be the equivalent of Social Services and were going to take Bashira into a safe house in Kabul.

When the whole of Two Section went to find her, we were amazed she wasn’t where we expected. Minutes later though, that moment when we all saw Bashira come out and we shouted at her to lift up part of her headdress, only to see the suicide vest strapped to her, is something I will never be able to forget. I suppose even suicide vest is the wrong description because it was either her father or one of his accomplices who would be trying to detonate it. Everyone was shouting to her to keep still at the same time as Qaseem was on the radio blocking mobile signals and the bomb disposal team was being requested urgently.

I don’t even remember throwing my helmet on the ground and running towards her. It was just instinct. I mean, if you had all these guys in uniform screaming at one of your kids or your young brothers or sisters, you wouldn’t think twice, would you? I was terrified, so think how she must have felt, especially when she didn’t even understand the language properly. Then they all started screaming at me. I wasn’t stupid enough to get hold of her (even if they thought I was) but I did want to keep her calm and as still as possible till Bomb Disposal came along. I can’t even remember what I said really either. You know me, I just witter, and when I’m nervous, I witter even more than usual. What I do remember though is her saying “Am I going to die?” How the hell do you respond to that? I was thinking “If you die, I die as well!” but I really didn’t believe that would have helped any of us. It was the one time I thought carefully before I said the first thing that came into my nut.

Captain James yelled at me to move away and the Bomb Disposal man came to remove the bomb vest. He looked like something from a science fiction film and literally seconds after he’d taken it off, an ASF soldier grabbed her and virtually threw her in their truck. They sped off in a cloud of horrible Afghan dust and that was it – the vest was detonated – and we were left wondering what on earth we had just witnessed. It doesn’t bear thinking about what would have happened if Badrai or whoever had detonated it himself. Carnage without a doubt.

Captain James has just gone now as well. He claimed he got something in his eye after the vest was detonated. I did the necessary with the eyewash kit we have but you know what? I’m not even sure he had anything in his eye – I think it might have been an excuse just to come in. I’ve actually thought this for a bit now – those blisters haven’t really needed daily treatment but who am I to tell him not to be so soft. I have to confess between you and me that I’ve fancied him for a while. I can’t remember the exact time because I tried to ignore it for ages. I had buried it in my “not to be thought of until I’m back home” memory box. It certainly didn’t help when you would see him working out in our little gym with his top off. He could do a Diet Coke advert any day!

In the beginning, he gave me a hard time and he seemed to delight in humiliating me but it all changed after Smurf nearly got himself blown up and I treated his injuries, ignoring all his orders not to go up in the helicopter back to Bastion. He sat with me for a while tonight after I’d cleaned his eye and we talked a bit about what happened with Bashira.

I’m just not sure how I’m supposed to react. I know what I want to do (there’s still a bit of the pre-Army Molly Dawes in there somewhere) but if I tested the waters, I could end up in really serious trouble, as could he. Stuff like this is completely forbidden. Mind you, we had to rehearse our duet earlier with Dangles and I had to be really careful not to give anything away, which is difficult when you are singing a duet and I had to keep holding the microphone with him. I might need to be careful in front of Dangles too. For a man, he may be more perceptive than I thought. He had a gleam in his eye watching us when we were practising. I’ll let you know how it goes in front of everyone tonight. Singing isn’t really me – I can do it with a karaoke machine after a few drinks but that’s about it – and there’s nothing even remotely alcoholic out here except in some of the antiseptic wipes!

Nickel45 · 07/12/2014 22:10

Have recorded too. There is one on now just flcked to with Ross Kemp in afghan, conditions are appalling though, yuk! Quite eye opening.

icemist · 07/12/2014 22:14

Love it iloveblue

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Nickel45 · 07/12/2014 22:22

Wow, ilove, that's fab, really good Smile ... Hope you don't have to stay up too late to do your "real" work!

Our Girl and Captain James Discussion thread Volume VI
Our Girl and Captain James Discussion thread Volume VI
pixieg1rl · 07/12/2014 22:27

That's really good ilove.

My only advice would be to edit out some of the extraneous stuff, like would Molly write "my sister Bella" or would she write Bella. The temptation can be to put lots of back story in when if you are writing something that's supposed to be a diary then this stuff would be referred to in passing or not at all. I went through the same process when I wrote my Molly thing; I think I cut about a third of it because as much as I wanted to wander off into thinking about Molly's relationship with Quaseem (I have such a soft spot for him), she probably wouldn't be thinking about him when she had a shirtless CJ in front of her.

Ilovelblue · 07/12/2014 22:29

Yes, that's good advice. If icemist would be so kind tomorrow as to put it on Google, I will mess around with it when I have sorted out my work stuff (and taken a bollocking if I don't get it sorted tonight!)

Switching the laptop off now before I get into Molly's diary even more.

apsara03 · 07/12/2014 22:30

Thanks ilove perfect bed time read Smile hope you get veil presentation done quickly and can then hit your pit for sweet CJ dreams.

icemist · 07/12/2014 22:35

Will do. Don't think ill get a chance to till after work. Will post link as soon as I can

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Richtea19 · 07/12/2014 22:40

Thank you Ilove for my bedtime story. Good thoughts to go to bed now. I'm hope you do too , and don't get into trouble in RL for work etc. It's terrible when you have things you have to do but just do things you want to do! Like Christmas cards.. Still haven't written them as I keep finding myself other jobs..

I love the eye drop scene. More words should of been said on that scene. Even after the trauma of the bomb being deternated and all that went with it, there appeared to be tension between them, not in a sexual way, but a caring sort of way. I wanted him to touch her and reassure her in someway? Too much reading between the lines.

I will sleep dreaming of Ep2, the duet and the wink, oh and the bulge (orphan) :)

pixieg1rl · 07/12/2014 22:46

Richtea I'm thinking about doing something with the eyedrop scene. I haven't watched it for ages though so need to do some research on it.

Richtea19 · 07/12/2014 22:55

Oh yes please! So much more to be said. You know that they would of been sitting there for a while because as a medic it's not just an eye drop, she would have to check out his ears and all sorts, sorry rambling! But they would of definatley said more. I expect he would of given her a bollocking for being so stupid and it might of got heated, but then afterwards he showed his compassion and Lady Luck and wouldn't of forgiven himself. It's before the duet so nothing "tactile" would of happened but maybe something that inspired the wink, lip biting duet scene!!!!

SPOfficer · 07/12/2014 23:46

ilove did enjoy the story, thank you. Have nothing to add to pixies comments on it.

On the compilation of best posts it would be nice to pull something together but would hesitate to do it by myself - it is somewhat subjective after all. Am happy to collate a best of based on people's top three favourite posts (or group of posts) if they want to indicate their choices.

I will be re watching ep2 in the coming week to research my Smurf POV piece. I just need to finish something else before I start work on it which I might post tomorrow or Tuesday depending on how it goes.

icemist thank you for posting those comments from the FF site. People are really very kind!

Anyway, have a good night all!

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