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Our Girl and Captain James Discussion Thread Vol V

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icemist · 24/11/2014 22:12

Feel free to join in as we discuss all things Our Girl related

Honorary Members:
Ben Aldridge
Tony Grounds

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Ilovelblue · 25/11/2014 21:44

Got to whizz over to my neighbour's house to let her dog out as she is going to be late home. Back in about 15 mins.

apsara03 · 25/11/2014 21:49

very excited about our fanfic. I've hit my pit as exhausted, just read them again as bed time storyGrin night night you cockwombles

icemist · 25/11/2014 21:50

i think we come across as fans of the programme. we have a laugh, enjoy a bit of drooling over a certain Captain, but we don't take it too far. Ok ok, drawings, limericks, poetry and our own fan fiction to some might be a but too much but compared to others....

We don't tweet obsessively about the programme, we've not set up a petition (seriously how old are these females!) and don't tag anyone and everyone at the BBC about it!

I think the majority of us would be really pleased with a 2nd series but have also accepted the fact that, the storylines were completed by the end of the 5th episode.

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icemist · 25/11/2014 21:51

excuse the horendous spelling mistakes today, I have lost the ability to spell properly today Grin

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cherin · 25/11/2014 22:04

I never had it
(The spelling ability)
;-)

cherin · 25/11/2014 22:05

Plus lets be honest, these phones/tablets have their own sense of irony, the way they interpret some of our words and correct them is at times hilarious!!
(And it's very handy to blame a piece of software, so why not? ;-)

pixieg1rl · 25/11/2014 22:07

As the great Douglas Adams said, we're mostly harmless.

Nickel45 · 25/11/2014 22:11

Above and beyond, again, icemist. These are brilliant.
cherin I had the same thought about TG (or even BA) actually reading these threads. Obviously we are all completely insane, but in a good way!! I reckon TG would love that we are having a good time, quoting the series incessantly (what writer wouldn't want that?!) and being very, very creative with his characters.

Our Girl and Captain James Discussion Thread Vol V
AuroraDR · 25/11/2014 22:12

Had a chance to have a look on fanfic for the first time today. Some of them on there are dreadful, while others are really good.

Just read the one that Icemist kindly put on Google doc and it's rather good.

I agree totally with Icemist that we come across as "keen and eager" fans not as 'bonkers'

monopod · 25/11/2014 22:12

Here's my contribution :)

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Stirrings began in Two Section's tent, exactly thirty minutes before morning PT at 0530. Molly glanced at her bleary-eyed compatriots as they grumbled their way out of bed. She'd been ready for a couple of hours - PT kit this time; they were on the soft slide now that they'd returned to Bastion, although Captain James and Kinders had made certain yesterday that they'd remembered they were still the British army, by putting them through a punishing 10k run in the unrelenting Afghan heat.

The physical exertion helped. She hadn't been able to sleep most of the night - first she'd had a nightmare, filled with Sohail's staring, glassy dead eyes, seeing herself being shot by the Taliban after Sohail had given her up, and then bleeding out in the dust as Captain James screamed at her to stay the fuck with him.

Captain James. After the nightmare had passed and she'd woken to find herself lying there on her camp bed in between Smurf and Dangles, the night punctuated by the occasional snort and scratch, she'd wished for sleep to overtake her again so she could dream of him, but instead she'd started worrying.

Captain James. Brown, warm eyes filled with the things that perhaps shouldn't have been said, but were out in the open now between the two of them. she'd found herself drowning in the embrace of Captain James' gaze.

I love you.

Army regulations forbid it, so I am NOT pulling you close, Molly. I am not sliding my hands under that plait of yours and pulling your face up to kiss you. I am not allowed to take you somewhere and make love to you in every possible way.

If you can wait for me, I can wait for you.

Molly shuddered with the hot flush of recollection. She knew she'd been overwhelmed with the sheer emotion of knowing that she'd cheated death, but the force of his conviction - and yes, admission of love for her - had had her insides in knots, although he'd barely touched her. The atmosphere between them had been so charged she'd had goosebumps, and she'd felt the rest of her body responding to him - she'd only just been able not to fall into him and bury her face in the musky comfort of his broad chest. How the hell was she going to make sure no one discovered what had happened between them? She flushed again at the thought of how unguardedly she had left her own heart open when they'd been approaching that tarp in the road and all that she would have offered him if he'd chosen to take it from her.

Nothing is stronger than army regulations. Despite the physical restraint, his thoughts had found expression through words that had stripped away his rank, their situation, the uncertainty of the months at the FOB.

"Molls, you ok?"

She started.

"Shit, Smurf. Sorry, I was miles away."

"PT at 0530, make sure you're hydrated. Don't think bossman's gonna give us an easy ride today either."

"Yeah, alright mate. I'm ready."

She exited the tent ahead of the rest of Two Section and stopped short as she came face to face with Captain James.

They stared at each other for a long moment.

He bit his lip before a half-laugh escaped him.

"Dawes. I have to say, I only saw you six hours ago, but you're a sight for sore eyes."

He smiled at her, an intimate look passing between them, and suddenly the worry left her. They'd make this work. They'd wait out.

monopod · 25/11/2014 22:13

Oops. That was a bit long.

Richtea19 · 25/11/2014 22:13

icemist How does the Google document work. Do you post on to MN or the Google doc? Not that I am going to write anything, I will leave that to the creative ones! But I would like to read them. Thanks :)

Richtea19 · 25/11/2014 22:16

Sorry ignore that, missed a whole page of posts! Had bird carnage when I came home from the bloody cats, just managed to clean up! I will catch up now!

icemist · 25/11/2014 22:16

love it monopod

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icemist · 25/11/2014 22:20

you can post your fiction here, then it can be added to whichever story on the google docs. anyone can add/edit the docs. if you don't wish to post your contribution on here, just add it to the docs.

I think they are reading really well. Smile

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firegirl · 25/11/2014 22:23

That wasn't too long at all monopod it was brilliant, really enjoyed reading that.

Richtea19 · 25/11/2014 22:24

Monopod brilliant !
icemist no worries with the spelling mistakes. Mine are terrible and my grammar. That's why I'm not writing Fan Fic and just reading it!

Just looked at Twitter...... What's going on with the crazy gang over there???!

I actually think we are the sane ones, we appreciate a good drama with a handsome leading man. Everyone else (including the people that have watche'd OG just once) are completley deluded!

galaxy99 · 25/11/2014 22:25

Welcome Aurora. I have read through the fan fiction and think it is fantastic. The weeks of intense OG study has paid off! Everything written is realistic in terms of how CJ and Molly would speak and act. I have enjoyed reading some of the stuff on the fan fiction website and think you should definitely add this.

richtea I have also became the proud owner of some Bluetooth speakers purchased for exactly the same reason. DSs are sick of the soundtrack.

Thanks for the link firegirl I have cast my vote and was wondering what you all think would be the best clip from the series to show at awards ceremonies when they show a little clip from each of the nominations?

Nickel45 · 25/11/2014 22:37

Love it monopod!
richtea, what's happening on twitter? ... I'm determined not to go on there, I spend far to long on here as it is!

firegirl · 25/11/2014 22:39

galaxy that's a really interesting question - what clip to show at an awards ceremony? I'm going to have to think about that and get back to you. Although methinks you may be a tad optimistic thinking OG will make it to the nominations, when noone in RL has seen it!

Ilovelblue · 25/11/2014 22:39

Great stuff monopod! I am really impressed with how we've put some bloody effort in! I've read some of the stuff already out there on the fanfiction website and am appalled at the spelling and grammar in some of the stories. What I like about the ones we have created is that (a) the spelling and grammar are up to scratch; (b) we don't have Molly speaking in that horrible accent where she apparently can't pronounce "th"; (c) we haven't diverted unbelievably from the scenes in the series.

Welcome to our two new posters by the way. You may have realised that the majority of us on here are now "hardcore", a term I coined only partly unintentionally last week.

cherin · 25/11/2014 22:40

Mmmhhhmm...maybe Molly going up that winch and being stupid-and-fucking awesome?

Monopod, that was brilliant!! I am also all proud that I got cross-referenced somehow, hihihihihi, getting all giggly (I swear no alcohol tonight! Just normal sleep deprivation...does my head in...)

Rhubarb01 · 25/11/2014 22:41

Late contributing tonight as I have had a busy day.

Firegirl it strikes me that we would need to think of a number of clips for an award ceremony after all there could be nominations in several categories including "Best Drama Serial", "Best Actor", "Best Actress", "Best Original Drama" (for the writing) so we would need examples for each category. Thinking caps on!

Richtea19 · 25/11/2014 22:41

Nickel , there is a campaign from the FB lot, which appears on Twitter as well to get a 2nd series. Also there are loads of tweets from OG fans (not hard core like us!) they are all ridiculous as your can only have 140 characters. Can you imagine that in MN? There would be a revolution!!!

Ilovelblue · 25/11/2014 22:46

Oh meant to say that a colleague who was new to my department today was making polite conversation and asking what I was doing when I got home tonight. After mentioning the usual cooking and chores, I murmured something about watching Holby which in truth has been my favourite weekday programme for years. She would have dropped through the floor if she knew that I've only paid scant attention to Holby since discovering this forum and if she found out about the fanfiction........ I just dread to think!

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