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Our Girl and Captain James Discussion Thread Vol V

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icemist · 24/11/2014 22:12

Feel free to join in as we discuss all things Our Girl related

Honorary Members:
Ben Aldridge
Tony Grounds

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orphan · 25/11/2014 08:58

SPO would love to read your zomromcom take on OG though. DP is currently working his way through The Walking Dead series so I sometimes catch a glimpse of zombie action.

Richtea19 · 25/11/2014 09:49

Cherin, outstanding fanfic. The .... Because I love you. I can actually picture him standing looking down on her saying that. All of the writing is excellent. I feel a day of not getting a lot done and reading through all the fanfic posts.

firegirl · 25/11/2014 10:13

Thought I would make up for my lack of contribution on the fanfic front by posting a photo to keep all you scribes inspired....

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pixieg1rl · 25/11/2014 10:17

Mine is coming, I may have to escape to the loos and finish it off because I can't bloody concentrate on work.

snumpy · 25/11/2014 10:22

Just got back from the gym. I'm trying Couch to 5k, still on week 1 as that's all I can manage at the moment (sad I know). At some points I was telling myself to dig in and picturing CJ saying put some bloody effort in. It certainly works.

On a completely unrelated theme, I have woken up with the biggest spot on my chin - if it pops i'll be red misted. I hope Lady Luck is looking after me!!

It's great to see that the posts have increased. I still can't believe we are on volume 5. Does anyone else worry when you look at the telly addicts menu and our thread isn't at the top or is it just me?

beachysandy75 · 25/11/2014 10:23

Oh my, am loving this!!! Don't let me get drawn in, have lots of work to do today! Beats writing stats reports though!

snumpy · 25/11/2014 10:30

Oh that's a nice pic Firegirl

Nickel45 · 25/11/2014 10:30

You guys are awesome at writing. Seeing as I can't contribute either, we need this picture!

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Nickel45 · 25/11/2014 10:33

Hope it works, sending from my phone. Sitting in a coffee shop (5 min peace before shopping) and getting very strange looks from the couple next to me. Must learn to bite my lip instead of laughing out loud at my phone!!

pixieg1rl · 25/11/2014 10:54

I hope there isn't a word limit on these posts. Apologies in advance if you don't like swearing or I've offended any religious sensibilities.
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As Molly took in his words the captain walked to the door, leaving it open so anyone passing could see in. He was struggling not to act on what he said and thought they both needed some help to get back on a professional ground.

He watched her collecting herself, wiping the tears from her cheeks, smudging the dirt and grime from her beautiful face. She took a deep breath and exhaled shakily, then another. He watched her, drinking her in. Her hair was escaping from its plait, her clothes thick with dust but she looked wonderful to him. This is all he had. All he could take to see him through the long weeks ahead as they worked out the rest of the tour. Sometimes the army was a cruel mistress.

There was a knock at the door. "Boss?"
"Kinders"
"All OK boss?"
"Yes. It doesn't look good for Sohail, Dawes just needed 5. Can you show her to her quarters?"
"Sure boss. Ready Dawes?"

Molly got to her feet, gave her face one last swipe and looked up. Her eyes shone as she looked at the captain. "Thank you sir" she tried to communicate everything she needed to say in those 3 words.

She followed Kinders across the patch of dust they called the parade ground. He lead them past the women's quarters and towards the men's. "Erm, Eggy, ain't I in with the women now?"

"Afraid not Dawes. They've rationalised the quarters and the women's are full. You'll be bunking with the lads for now. We'll try and move you if a space comes up. You coped at the FOB ok, and it's only for a few weeks."

Molly sighed. She usually loved being one of the lads but after months of close quarters with them she had been looking forward to spending time with Jackie and some other women. Plus at Bastion she wouldn't have her med tent to retreat to when 2 section started to grate on her nerves.

"This is you. Get settled in. PT session at 0600 tomorrow" said Kinders, holding the tent flap open. Molly looked around. The tent was a tip. Packs open and kit flung everywhere. She couldn't make out which bunks were taken and which were free.

"Lost again, Molls?" Said Brains, looking up from his letter.

"No you numpty, I'm in with you lot, women's quarters are all full." she replied. "If one of you twats asks for a pop tart and I'll shave your eyebrows off in your sleep"

"Yay, you're one of the stags." said Baz, making stag horns with his hands and mooing.

"Stags don't moo you bell end" said Brains.

"Well what noise do they make?"

"Dunno, but they don't fucking moo."

"Stags? Reindeer more like. Mansfield can be Rudolf next time he forgets his factor 50" replied Molly. "Now which bunk is mine?"

"I think Smurf saved that one next to him" said Baz, "no funny business, we'll be watching" He made kissing noises and waggled his eyebrows.

"I love Christmas" said Mansfield.

"Of course you do; you're the Virgin Mary" piped up Dangles.

As a scuffle broke out between them Molly sank onto her camp bed and sighed.

Nickel45 · 25/11/2014 11:01

Wahay, stags!! Way above and beyond pixie, brilliant!Smile

firegirl · 25/11/2014 11:04

Very good pixieg1rl, like it!

Ilovelblue · 25/11/2014 11:05

On my way to work this morning, I had a fit of giggles. In the last six weeks or so, I have gone from only ever having posted once in my entire life (and never got a reply to it) to being on this thread every day. Also had never heard of fanfiction and then a few weeks later, am actually writing some of it!

Decompression as far away as ever methinks!

Back to my spreadsheet....

pixieg1rl · 25/11/2014 11:24

Thank you for letting me get that out of my system. The whole mixed sex tent thing has been bothering me for weeks.

And I threw in the stags as a little treat for us all Wink

Richtea19 · 25/11/2014 11:50

It's brilliant pixie! I'm addicted all ready.

Like many others, I have never ever posted on this sort of forum before. I've dabbled in FB but mainly to keep track of the kids. This is by far the best, and takes my mind off all the boring, stressy, ordinary RL stuff that goes on in my life. :)

AuroraDR · 25/11/2014 12:23

This is my first post to a thread
I have been in hospital for server all weeks and followed your thread from vol 1, but was unable to post until now
I just wanted to say I have not laughed so much in ages . At one point I thought my stitches may pop.
I am home now and recovering with both our girl Dvd's, which were kindly purchased by DH to aid my recovery.

Here is little something to say thanks for the laughs

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AuroraDR · 25/11/2014 12:25

Several weeks sorry still can not type lol

snumpy · 25/11/2014 12:43

Welcome AuroraDR, lovely pic.

Pixie - fan-bloody-tastic piece of writing, I hope there more Smile

cherin · 25/11/2014 12:45

Welcome Aurora!! Hope you recovery speeds up, and glad you're joining us in the Mad House.
I am myself surviving to a morning of mock interviews to GCSE students, many of them of Pakistan or afghan heritage. None of them put their language skills in their cv, I told them off gently and I have been tempted to try the "sta num sahdie" from OG, but I wasn't brave enough!!

I love the fan fic so far!! It's developing so well!! Love the tent explanation too (that detail bugged me, too!!)
Gosh I need to focus up now, and understand where I am going. Looks a bit like Kabul but must actually be wembley...ish...

apsara03 · 25/11/2014 12:58

Thanks for the latest fanfic, I saved it as a treat for when I'd finished cleaning, definitely made latrine clean less bad Smile. I
Thanks for the photo Aurora, I'm sure the eves will aid your recovery

monopod · 25/11/2014 13:00

You lot have seriously brightened up my day today. Just look at the talent you've unleashed! Tremendously impressed. You should be very proud of the writers you've become (actually you've always had it in you!) ;)

All I've managed on the creative front today is calling someone a bellend which had my office colleagues in stitches. Coming from me, that's some serious swearing. It seemed to fit the bill though...

Please write on :)

monopod · 25/11/2014 13:01

AuroraDR best wishes for a speedy recovery :)

Richtea19 · 25/11/2014 13:35

Welcome AuroraDR, lovely picture, thank you. Hope you get better soon.

I went to TK (tat) Max today, the whole store is being taken over by Stags. I couldnt find any stag panties, but plenty of dodgy looking stag fleeces... Think I will "wait out" for the camo top!

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icemist · 25/11/2014 13:36

Wow!! cherin and pixie they are amazing!
Can't wait to get home and add them to my file of the others from last night.

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SPOfficer · 25/11/2014 13:39

Great job pixie that brightened up my lunchtime! Also that picture of a straight jacket thing you posted yesterday made me spray my tea all over my phone! Must remember not to eat or drink at the same time as reading this.

orphan am thinking about a zombie instalment starting from the end of ep.3. I think it will be the perfect opportunity to examine further the complex emotional interrelationships between the characters set against the backdrop of a complex geopolitical situation. There is nothing like marauding flesh eating zombies to tease out the more subtle themes in a narrative don't you think?