dying breed
yes I know the purple pen of progress has been embraced wholeheartedly as the way, the truth and the life.
Redrafting can be important, I agree, but where I suspect we disagree is that I think it should be done after teacher input.
If you are going to share success criteria after the essay and have students improve, then why not share it before?
In other words, if they knew how to improve, they’d have done so.
And (for example) if my students do a poor essay on the concept of class in An Inspector Calls, I should go back and teach that again, but it’s unlikely that essay title will come up again and general good teaching should be the approach, really. In other words, rather than endlessly redrafting one response, a more general ‘let’s re familiarise ourselves with this text and themes in it’ is surely better.
Sorry if rushed, wrangling with small child.