Yes, but perhaps people should make an effort to look beyond the style, or alternatively, they could object to that specifically, without dismissing and minimising the salient points she's making.
I think the NCT has done some dodgy things over the years (promoting homeopathy, putting men's rights above women's, etc.).
In this case they clearly promoted a product being used in a way that has been shown in a coroner's court to have contributed to if not been wholly responsible for the death of a tiny baby.
And it seems that they've behaved in the manner of all large profit-making companies, which is to say they've initially denied a link, then later backtracked and tried to erase evidence of earlier denials, putting their own profits first rather than the welfare of children and parents.
I am able to look past the OP's writing style and see that, why are so many others focusing on the style and not the substance?