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SpringHen · 24/02/2018 22:07

Hetty did phone Molly that one time to reach out to her when her middle child was suffering horrendous cyber bullying and she wondered if Molly with her previous high flighing career in law could help...
...She didn't actually tell Molly any of this though because she kept being interrupted so that Molly could tell her that she FINALLY understood what bliss motherhood is...
...well at least SOMEONES happy thought Hetty...

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SpringHen · 24/02/2018 22:36

Molly is now a widow (but still sexy) with a beautiful but distant daughter. She has moved to ruggedcliffbeach in Cornwall to be a writer. She hopes for solitude and peace so that she can finish the last book in her best selling series but cannot help but notice the strange young woman who looks out to sea from the same spot every day. When the young woman suddenly stops showing up at her daily spot because it's fucking raining and the dog can shit just as well in the garden, or some other logical cinclusion Molly's investigation takes a dark turn, but is she getting closer to solving the mystery of the girl from the beach, or searching for something closer to home?

#yourpublisherisntpayingyoutopissoffonwildgoosechasesMolly

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CircleofWillis · 24/02/2018 22:55

But Hetty has a worrying secret. After her husband left to move to Amsterdam she lost lots of weight through worry. Her inability to eat caused her to faint at the feet of a man who could not lift her despite her weight loss (not that she had been fat before - just ..... Molly).
He took her to MacDonald’s and insisted she fill up on Big Macs and chicken nuggets but then didn’t have his wallet so she paid.
She told him everything (I would say ‘poured out her heart’ but this is Hetty not Molly).
She has been seeing him almost everyday since then. Picnics, walks in the park, quick smoking breaks on the doorstep while her children slept upstairs. She has no idea what to think and is worried that if he meets Molly he would prefer her. After all who wouldn’t.
#FuckoffMolly

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GreenRut · 25/02/2018 06:25

And yet life has a way of weaving the past into the present, so it was that Monday morning, on her way to pick up her regular pain au chocolate from the local artisan bakery that Molly finally came face to face with the mystery woman she had seen staring out into the distance so many times.

An old friend became a new friend as Hetty ran through her well practiced surprise face on 'bumping' into Molly that Monday. Platitudes flowed between the faux shock from Hetty, and the genuine horror within Molly. Hasn't time flown! (Hetty had agonised over whether to use this line - she was happy she did, it landed at exactly the right point) Haven't you....grown! (Despite being horrified, Molly was grateful that Hetty was still at least 7lbs heavier than her, but internally noted that Hetty was sniffling and the weight loss was probably in part due to a nasty bout of flu).

The following hour swept them up in a whirlwind of catching up, the urgency of which was only matched by the howling coastal wind coming in from the west. imagine the coincidence! Hetty's new one woman business was based in the same remote village Molly now lived in. And Hetty wasn't alone. Her boyfriend had moved with her - luckily he had found work immediately at the local lidl. Molly's horror was momentarily replaced with intrigue at the mention of Hetty's love interest. "We must have dinner! Peoni would love to meet you! Do you still like everything deep fried? " She scribbled her address on an old Victoria Secret receipt "be here at 8, to eat for 9" she said breezily, only vaguely concerned that her address was written on evidence that she needed to use shape fitting lingerie these days.

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CircleofWillis · 25/02/2018 12:11

“What do you mean by ‘He owns Lidl’?”. Molly’s voice was the closest to shrill Hetty had ever heard from Molly. “I thought that was run by some communist cooperative”.

“Shh”, Hetty whispered, frantically trying to pull Molly back into the kitchen. “He doesn’t like to tell people. He’ll be embarrassed if he knows you know. It’s just - you spent an hour telling him how to stack shelves. Please don’t let on.”
“Of course”, Molly unpinned her hair and swished it over her shoulder. “It is so hot in here”, she loosened the top button of her blouse. Her return to the dining room with the tray of starters was slower and more undulating than her retreat had been.

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squishysquirmy · 25/02/2018 14:53

"... And that's how we discovered poor Hetty's dreadful intolerance of shellfish" trilled Molly, wrapping up the anecdote; "The upholstery on the chaise-lounge had to be burnt!"
Hetty was such a dear friend that Molly felt it her duty to make her new man feel welcome. Hetty had become strangely quiet, but Molly kept the conversation flowing. She sparkled like a bottle of reasonably priced Lidl Prosecco, whilst Hetty's new boyfriend hung on her every word. "Of course" she continued "you did eat a lot of those crab cakes, didn't you Hetty?" She turned to the boyfriend with a giggle " Watching Hetty at a buffet reminds one of a game of hungry hungry hippos! "
Molly remembered how Hetty had confided in her about the "present" her ex had brought back from one of his many trips to Amsterdam.
"Speaking of crabs" she continued " is your little problem all sorted now, Hetty?...."

#FuckoffMolly

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CircleofWillis · 25/02/2018 15:47

Dieter and Hetty caught each other’s eye and could keep straight faces no longer.
Molly stopped mid anecdote to stare in amazement at the pair.
“I’m so sorry I didn’t believe you Hetty, she is hilarious.” Dieter choked out between sobs of laughter. “Molly, thank you for your hospitality but we are going out for a supper Hetty can actually eat without being hospitalised. Luckily we’ve reserved a table for 9.30. We’ll be early.”
Molly gaped at their retreating backs “so you don’t own Lidl?” She asked feeling that at least would help her to reclaim her equanimity.
“No”, he answered and turned as he heard her sigh of relief “but my grandfather does. Poor Hetty finds it very embarrassing but you can’t help your family.” He pressed a warm hearty kiss on Hetty’s lips. “Let’s go”.
“Give me a minute, please Dieter.” Hetty hung back she faced Molly and for the first time ever realised they were the same height.
“Fuck off Molly” was all she said.

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iklboo · 25/02/2018 15:52

Bravo!

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CircleofWillis · 25/02/2018 17:53

But I didn’t accidentally terminate #FuckoffMolly did I?
I really need to know more about Peoni’s early years.
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iklboo · 25/02/2018 17:58

No, no. You've just helped Hetty move on like a good MNer Grin

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CircleofWillis · 25/02/2018 18:06

Phew

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squishysquirmy · 25/02/2018 19:14

Love it! Go Hetty!

Molly will be fine.
She will sigh sadly and reflect on her friend's nervous breakdown.
On some level, Molly had always known that Hetty was secretly in love with her, and finally the infatuation had driven Hetty to the edge. What else could explain such an outburst? It was tragic how many friends (male and female) had fallen in love with her over the years.
Molly stared out to sea. Life could be so very cruel when you were cursed with captivating beauty and a magnetic personality.

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Petalflowers · 25/02/2018 19:43

Captivating beauty and a magnetic personality... . Molly then glanced down at her daughter and realised that Peoni had inherited these qualities, as again she had been chosen to play the lead role in the nursery school play again.

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MrsFionaCharming · 25/02/2018 20:16

Whilst dressing to go to Peoni’s performance, Molly stopped to glance in the mirror. At this angle, she was almost pretty, though her thick chestnut hair refused to do what she wanted it to, and her eyes were possibly a little bit too blue.

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yolofish · 26/02/2018 18:21

What with the success of the cupcake empire and the loads of hot men around, Molly decides she needs some domestic help. And Peoni hasnt made naice friends, so she needs someone to play with after school.

But who to choose? Agata the eastern european white blonde with slavic eyes pulls pints in the local pub of an evening while shagging the grooms and wannabe jockeys from the local racing yard - she'd be great company for Peoni Molly thinks.

Meanwhile Mrs R from the village (salt of the earth but lives on the council estate) is a cracking cleaner and would transform Molly's faintly dingy cottage into an oasis of freshness every day.

"What shall I do" thinks Molly while rearranging a perfect chestnut tress. "I know, I shall employ them both!"

#fuckoff Molly

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yolofish · 01/03/2018 22:06

"hmmm" thought Molly, flicking her chestnut ringlet out of her bright blue eyes, "I seem to be alone now, because Agata is teaching Peoni how to do eye make up and the cottage is pristine thanks to Mrs.R. I wonder if I should call Hetty and see if she and Dieter have had a big row yet?"

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