It's an interesting set of points. I broadly agree with them, though I think I'd have been slightly universal in saying things like men will go to great lengths to pursue the path of paraphilia. That's not quite true, most men don't and wouldn't want to.
The important point is that male sexuality is vulnerable to this sort of problem, and it begins generally without any intent or real awareness, often in quite young men and boys. One they are on that path it becomes more and more difficult to interrupt and it also becomes more and more difficult for them to have a satisfying sex life and relationship.
If the culture wants to minimize that kind of thing they need to minimize triggers and the things that further entrench the paraphilia (porn, overt public sexuality all over the place, for example) and maximize the things that lead to a more stable sexual person, whatever they are.
We've created the opposite, maximizing the chance of triggers, making it easy practically and psychologically to carry on, and actually rather difficult to get off the train early on. The worst thing being some sort of psychologist telling a young man that yes, he really is a lesbian and society should back that idea up.