Well done Pinky.
Do you think that the committees it had to go are well up with everything that's going on, or do you think they know you are sensible and read it and it sounded very sensible and so said yes fine? Just so many threads on here saying that much of the general public esp men haven't really given this much thought.
OR are the advocates dead terfy?
By the way I love the style of it when I was reading it I thought, this is the way to write documents that sound assertive and professional and expert. The "We note" and "we acknowledge" - it's great.